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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hrm...i'm more than just a little shocked by how good this story was. You did an awesome job considering the pairing is a bit unusual. Your descriptions were fantastic and VERY graphic. I really enjoyed the story, I can't wait to see what you cook up next.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Personally, I'm fond of the Tsunade/Naruto pairing and you've written quite the clever story. Adding Shizune in just makes it more interesting ^_^. I look forward to your updates!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, way to GO!
We need something like this amidst the flood of Yaoi. I look forward to the continuation of this and your other planned fics, esp the Naru/Anko one.
We need something like this amidst the flood of Yaoi. I look forward to the continuation of this and your other planned fics, esp the Naru/Anko one.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic and I wholeheartedly agree with what you're trying to do. I've got nothing against yaoi but there's just so damn much of it. Anyway, I'd like to offer whatever help I can give. Hoping to see some more stuff from you guys in the future.
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why not write a Harem fic, where Naruto ends up with Sakura and Hinata, possibly even the rest?
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MY, this has to be one of the best erotica to be found on this site.
Most stories are a 'quicky' type, they get straing to the sex, hump a few times, then its over. Thats smut, not erotica.
I loved the time she took to pleasure Naruto and the fact that you portray a virgin in real light, inexperienced, slightlyspooked but eager all at the same time.
I will have watch for more.
Most stories are a 'quicky' type, they get straing to the sex, hump a few times, then its over. Thats smut, not erotica.
I loved the time she took to pleasure Naruto and the fact that you portray a virgin in real light, inexperienced, slightlyspooked but eager all at the same time.
I will have watch for more.
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job
can't wait to see more ^_^
can't wait to see more ^_^
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn well time some1 wrote a Naruto/Tsunade story. I'm so sick of this fangirl m/m crap. There is just to much of it. Any way you have my full support with this story. I can't wait to see more of it, especially now that Shizune walked in on them. LOL, Tsunade and Naruto have a lot to explain. Please keep updating at a regular pace
OokamiShiroi out.
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If you need any help with pre-reading or such just contact me and I'll gladly lend a hand.
OokamiShiroi out.
p.s.
If you need any help with pre-reading or such just contact me and I'll gladly lend a hand.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have another person willing to stop the yaoi obsessed fangirls of the naruto section. its going the way of gundam wing.. everystory will be flamed if its not a m/m pairing... gah im not against yaoi i dont find people reading it in small dose's but this is to much for one series.
on the fic. well written and surpnglyngly in character for a lemon.
please continue
on the fic. well written and surpnglyngly in character for a lemon.
please continue
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter