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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very plausible idea for a story, but could use a bit of deposition.
You've captured Gaara's child-like uncertaintity nicely and the reactions with Naruto play smoothy.
Even though English isn't your native language, you should look into getting a beta reader to proof your stories, turn them into a smoother read. That's the only real fault I see in this f I c I certainly look forward to any updates.
You've captured Gaara's child-like uncertaintity nicely and the reactions with Naruto play smoothy.
Even though English isn't your native language, you should look into getting a beta reader to proof your stories, turn them into a smoother read. That's the only real fault I see in this f I c I certainly look forward to any updates.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...more...More...MORE...
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uber cute. *_* More!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's really cute. I went all giggly reading it. innocent!Gaara is so damn irresistable.
Are you looking for any betas? I'd love to be yours.
Are you looking for any betas? I'd love to be yours.
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, even though Gaara is a little ooc. But thats ok ^__^. Gotta love the NarutoxGaaraxNaruto fics ^__^
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the set up and direction for this fic is unusual right now. Good writing.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the shy and blushing gaara is so ii!!ii!!!
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok this fic has cought my atticion but, I need the next chap to decead if I like this fic or not so......update soon.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll happily leave a review after reading this wonderful story! I utterly love it! it's so kawaii, Gaara's so talkative, sweet, innocent, and Naruto's the same, but more knowing. Oh, I can't wait to see how this turns out, please continue!
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~Uwa, that was so cute. I can't wait for the rest!