rate_review Reviews

Truly a great piece of work. Almost no out of character bits, and those that were out of character were probably just caused by my skewed perception of the characters. I have spoken with the author, and am pleased to announce that chapter 3 will be up soon.

PS: Naruto + Hinata + Kiba = Dream Sandwich.

Woooah!! Now that was one chapter worth waiting for! That was freaking awesome! i loved how you incorporated Jiraiya into the fic.. Haha.. that was cool! and here i was thinking that backstage would be the end. But no! that was only the beginning! i loved this chapter from beginning to end! A great job, very well done and really good writing skills! Hmm... next will be Tenten right?? Maybe you could have Neji appear up on stage as well, and Lee if you want to... You could give him a makeover or something.. You're the author so hope to see another great work up soon!!

Copy Ninja! Copy Ninja! Copy Ninja! I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry and update! This last one was pretty awesome. I like to think that the last three just walked off-stage and are now finishing what they started (rather loudly) in Hinata's dressing room. Sounds pretty funny to me. Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Can you say HHHHHHOT? Damn, Hinata is one lucky gal. Kiba and Naruto? Who could turn down that delicious sandwich.wr! wr! More flying speedos, more flying speedos! Can't wait ! (Kakashi!? ::gasp!::!!) Please update soon.

Damn that was hot! Can't wait to read more, Did I read right, is there gonna be some Kakashi action in the next chappie? WooooHoooo!!!!!!!!

Heh heh. Finally you post them here. Awesome story, in case you didn't know that. XD

Update soon! That was awesome! I laughed so hard at one point I fell off my chair! Update soon!

-ChelseKA: KA: HisBeautiful

haha, that was really good! wanna see more realllly soon. is tenten coming out dressed as chun li? thus the name? good one. keep up the great work and email me when the chapter's up pwease?? *puppy eyes*

Well a pretty funny story, for other pairings you could do both Neji x Tenten and Naruto x Hinata (I mean think about fox and rabbit you have them as), what are you going to do have Naruto sprout some tails), I know both are "common" pairings but I like them. Keep up the good work and when the next chapter is out I hope Hinata has enough courage to strut her stuff.

This was really funny to read. Ino and Shika's part was great, although it's a pity that Lee didn't get a chance with Sakura, I like that pairing and I haven't seen them much in this kind of fic. It'd be great if Hinata doesn't make up her mind in the next chapter, then Naruto, to support her, takes her hand and pulls her out with him and they make a joint show. Sorry, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story, but that'd be wild. And Naruto/Hinata, despite being a popular pairing, doesn't have much adult fationtion about them either.