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Have you seen Fruits basket? Well, I think so, 'coz you use names from that anime. Shigure, Aya ( Ayame) and Kana... It bothers me. But without those names, you fanfic is pretty good. Finally a seme Iruka. I have searched for this :P It's always Kakashi that is a top in the bed.

Well, it's deffineately not what I had expected. I like Rei, he's cool. Shigure and Kana seem to be a bit odd but then again they're supposed to be that way. XD
Not sure if I like this portrail of Iruka-sensei *heavy duty Iruka fan* but it is quite a refreshing idea. I'll contiue to read as you post. ^^

O.o ....Aggresive Iruka....
Kakashi uke O.o!!!

yaaay new chapter. ^^ I'm glad that Kakashi finally met Aya, though I must say I'm not sure what I think of her. I don't think that Kakashi's reaction to her request was quite warranted, but then he is operating on the knowledge of what she's done before, so I suppose it makes sense. ^^ Thanks for posting, and I look forward to more.

I really like it, but I was thinking, if Aya and Iruka have been apart for so long, I doubt that her baby would be Iruka's. It simply doesn't make sense. Your version of Iruka's really interesting, though.

Hmm, things are turning out interestingly. I'd like to see what happens next. Your Iruka is really different, I like him.

::grabs author; shake; shake shake:: Write more! Noooowwwwwww!!!!! Cool. I knew Iruka was a prankster, but green hair and a tattoo? Cool! *^_^* Did he ever get any body piercings? Iruka with a nipple-piercing. *^_-* Mrrrow. My kinda he' he's just like me. Except I dyed my hair blood red for 6 months, pink for x-mas (though really it shoulda been purple) and teal'n'caramel w/ purple bits for my b/day. Dye just does not like my hair... And my nose is pierced. And I don't have a tattoo (yet). Anyways, this story fun. Interesting how Iruka deals with the whole sex-in-hallway-then-throwing-out thing. Write more, soooon!!!

*shakes you by your collar* continue damn it! xD

That i can do! Very nice plot development, exelent character rythem as well. keep up the good work!

hiya I gotta make this quick, the cat's whining at me. I think that maybe Kakashi will be uke in this. please?