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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was So Sad...And Erotic.I Can Imagine All Of That Happening.I Pity Both of Them...Esp. Neji,In The Fic.
...Also,It Was Beautifully Written.
...Also,It Was Beautifully Written.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, please tell me this has a sequel
this was soooooooooooooooooooooo good
this was soooooooooooooooooooooo good
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Great work
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously I love Neji and Hinata pairings but if I remember correctly, at the time of the Chuunin Exam, Hinata was about 12 years old and Neji and was only 1 year old. Okay, 13 may be alright for a boy to know about sex and stuff, but 12? Is this not a bit harsh? Even I really want to go on reading, I cannot. I feel like it's wrong, I mean, they are way too young to be engaged in bondage, right? If not for the age thing I would definitely go on reading. This is just me but it would be really nice if you can change the time and their ages a bit, so I can read on. Still, the writing is good and the portrayal of Hinata was good. Cheers!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am just having a _field day_ with all of your fics. This one was also great. Ahh. Keep keeping up the good work. Or something. o_O
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Sadly, that does seem like something Neji would do...
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have the tention going with a respectable forse.Please continue!!!!
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very-well written and really interesting so far. Do you ever plan on continuing this fic?