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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Hitomi
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 24)
Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit! Such a calm, sweet, growing chapter and bam! Itachi right at the end!
Holy shit girl, you sure know what you're doing here!

I am super-doper happy for the nicely [and quickly] updated chapter; please, regulare paced updates are goooood. Specialy when the chapter comes out as good as this one did. ^_^

Excelent chapter! Honestly!
I can't WAIT to see what'll happen next! *shivers with exceitment*

Hope you update soon,
Love,
Hitomi.

Ja ne~
person KyuTails(too lazy to log in_
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM

WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE? HOW COULD YOU!? Do you ENJOY playing around with my dwindling sanity?
It's ITA-CHAAAANNN!!! ISNT IT?!

YOU EVIL!!

CONTINUE!
person demonesse
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... i don't know how you get these ideas, but rest assured, they're really good and well appreciated! *likes the idea of walking in on sasuke and naruto making out* ahh, plot thickens again... *hangs on to cliffhanger precariously* really well done! keep the good writing up!
person Emina
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!
:Screams:
ITACHI!
Usually when Itachi comes into a fanfic, it doesn't mean anything good >>(But I love himll^^ll^^)
But nevertheless, I LOVED the new cha.
B.
BIG *kudos to you ^^

-Emina
[*Kudos- Props]
person lo
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
once again you have put up another awsome chapter. I just want to write and encourage you. YOu are so good I can't get over it. Keep up the good work.
person KyuTails-too lazy to log in
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please...continue...for the love of my sanity...continue!
person lalala
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo... Ran found the lube didn't she? I can't wait till the next chapter, update soon please!
person demonesse
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh! what a beautiful chapter, thank you so much for updating. i have to say that i really enjoy your writing. it's got a very good flow and rhythm to it, not to mention all that sasunaru angst and loving. *happy sigh* write write write! wah.. it look likes the plot's heating up again!
person dAni3Lr
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa, it took u quite a long bit to write the nxt chapter i see.. been waiting for chapter 23 for ages i think ^^; nice chapter abt naruto's past!! keep it up!!
person arashi_14
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just love your story! you write really well and although it has been more than 20 chapters, it captures my attention more and more. ^_^

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