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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person dAni3Lr
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u're back after sOoooooooooooo long >.< i hate orochimaru.. he's a phedophile!! damn it!! someone catch him pls omg~* how come Itachi knew? *stratch stratch* he still cares for Sasuke huh? :) i want naruto to go back to sasuke soon... *sobz* T^T
person vashta
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, please tell me it will have a happy ending. Sasuke and Naruto will get back together right? Update please.
person Hitomi
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 28)
"Naruto was the perfect height for kissing." Now That's a good sentence.^^
I'm angry at Sasuke for what he did! The freakin' bastard! Is that his only option to get into some fucking school?!!

And Naruto... Oof!
I want a happy ending.
:/
person -
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I used to love this fic, it was my favorite *cries* I don't like the fact that Sasuke is with Oro...I hate bastard Sasuke I HATE HIM! That scene was the ickiest scene!! I never expected it!! GRR I should have had though! I don't like where the fic is going :S sorry. After all this waiting and disloyalty from Sasuke? geehhhh I hate that bastard anyway! I hope he dies and Naruto marries me *bwa ha ha ha!* lol!
person hogo-chan
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eewie! that whole thing w/ sasuke and orochimaru was iiiicky! *whines* but the naruto and ran thing was awesome! and it was absolutely adorable how you wrote jiraiya's character! i loved it! especially the jiraiya part! *giggles* thanks for updating though! i've really missed reading your fic! i hope you have time to update the next chapter soon! thanks again!
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my request! Can't wait to see what happens next!! UPDATE SOON!!

PS Sasuke, stop being a whore and go back to Naruto already!!
person clowangel
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still wondering whether I like the direction this story is heading towards.. *sigh* Well..I hope things brighten up because I really cant stand reading such horribly depressing stuff. It kinda gets on my nerves. And right now, I have this thing against Sasuke because of how he's behaving. >>; Asshole. Bleehhh
person clare-chan
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man! You know you don't have to follow the anime, right? Like, Sasuke could change his mind. Yeah. He really could. He could stop being a bastard and admit that all he really needs are his friends and Naruto. Who gives two sh1ts about Itachi anyway?! *hopeless sigh* I just want to see them together again so much! Please. Please write more. Even if it is painful to read *is being over dramatic now*, I want MORE!! :)
person MiyaJadecube
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ *grins madly* Who says patience doesn't pay off?! Thanks for the delightful next chapter. *bows* It seems some new developments are underway, I'm quite interested in how Sasuke will handle his upcoming decision...err...then again, it seems like he already accepted. *gurr* Evil snake...*gurr* Then again, Sasuke seems to change his mind, last minute, quite frequently, thus anything is possible at this point. *sniggers* The 'Ran' incident was interesting as well, I was wondering how you would bring her & the aunt back into the picture. Almost forgot about her promiscuous behaviour a while back. *laughs*

Ya for a decent Sakura! *blushes* Sorry, but I just don't hate the girl, don't like her getting the guy in fanfiction, but in the anime/manga I turly think she can be awesome at times...tough chicks always rock. ;P Anyway, happy to see that she is being helpful in the Sasuke/Naruto relationship, and not just in the way. Oh oh...and pervey sensei made an appearence! Woot! *ahem* Gotta love how you did it too...hope to see more of his 'wise teachings'. ^_^ Wow, I would love to say something more constructive in the review...but I was happy with it...so...good job...nothing to critisize. *bows*
person flower_of_konoha
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sometimes naruto is just too nice...i'd have slapped the bitch a good one...and sasuke's still as stupid as ever!

very nice and hope to see next chap soon!

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