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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Anon
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Heather
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i'm really enjoying your story! it's awesome. i cannot wait until you update. i'm really glad i came across it. i usually read stories on fanfiction.net, and an author to one of the stories i was reading recommended your story. i am so glad i started reading it. once i began, i had to be bribed to get off the computer!!! i really like how, even though the story isn't in the typical "naruto" setting, you kept all the little nuances to each and every character. from orochimaru seeming like a snake, to perverted jiraiya, or the hidden pain underneath naruto's cheery outward appearance-it's all great. so, i just wanna let you know that you are doing a great job, and i hope the next chapter will be coming out soon. i can't wait!!!
person Dreamer
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto just when tings were getting better they collasp on him. It will be intriguing to see if things get any better between Naruto and Sasuke.
person demonesse
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to quote jerry maguire (not springer)

'you had me at hello' or just chapter one. your pick.

wow. your fic never fails to amaze me. it's become an epic unto itself.

like how you've introduced orochimaru now. and how you've fleshed ran out, just when we were all ready to hate her guts. as usual.. it's pure as snow naruto who trudges on in life.

you're so totally going down in fanfic history (if you're not already down) with this fic. wow. thanks for writing!
person Arryelle
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oK THIS WAS MY FIRST REAL LONG SASNARU FIC AND IT TOOK MY 2 DAYS TO READ ALL YOUR CAHPPIES AND I LOVED THEM ALL EXCEPT THIS RECENT PLZ TELL ME THAT SASUKE DIDN'T HAVE SEX WITH ORICHIMARU PLZ TELL ME NOOOOOOOOO I CAN'T STAND IT AND I THINK HE DID EMAIL AND TELL ME I'M WRONG PLZ

ARRY
person Arryelle
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon

arry
person Momochi Zabuza
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is amazing! Wow! Sasuke is actually controlling himself? I hope to find ItaXNaru, then it'll be another thing Itachi has taken from Sasuke.

I absolutely adore this fanfic! It's so deep and very detailed. Love the SasuxNaru'ness! UBER-kawaii!

Please update soon!

Arigatou Amon-san!!!

::hands a Mist Village hitai-ite and Zabuza plushy:: Souvenir from one of your readers!

Bai Becca-san!
person vashta
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let it take as long for Nar and Sas to get back together as it did in the Manga! I would go thinking that way! Update soon please, you are an excellent writer.
person rhichan
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg YESS NEW CHAPTER! ahaha! It was great!
Ran! That evil ho! ;_; Shes so meannn!
omg please update soon pleaseee!!!
xo rhi xo
person TenshiKatou
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chappie is pretty fulfilling, if i may say.

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