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Wow... that's all I can say! Near they end I thought it was going to finish horribly and found myself getting worked up over it XD But seriously beautiful story and beautifully read! Thank- you very much!

Hello Author,
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Wow! I really love your story so much, I couldn't believe it when it was over. I'm re-reading it now, thirty-two chapters just isn't enough! You're a really amazing writer, I also love your fanfic Evolution, but Spiral Falling is definitely the best I've read and probably, I think, the best I'm ever going to read. You have a lovely way of describing things - your story was just beautiful. Thanks so much!

AWWW YAY FOR ITACHI!!! *sighs* if only...he was like that for real..

yeah, love the story ^_^

awww..



*sniffles...

that...that was amazing!!

gyah!

*runs away before she cries to hard*

oh nooooo itachi isn't it? *hyperventalates.. but..but itachi + sasuke fic = ANGST ANGST ANGST!!! *tear.

love the story ^_^

awww i really like it so far ^_^. i just read up to interlude part II thinger.. chap 7 i think. and i dunno, i feel more sorry for sasuke than naruto, because i guess i can relate to him more.. i thought it would be the other way around before i read it.. meh *is confused. but anyways, much love for this story :) really really good. *grins

o god that was fantabulous o____________o brilliant job :D

One word. WOW! This has been an extremely long adventure for me. What a WONDERFUL read that you have shared with us all. Thank you so much from the very bottom of my heart. This is one of the rarest fics that you can actually sit on a quiet, chilly evening wrapped up in a blanket and with a hot cuppa and enjoy it thoroughly. Which I did immensely! I'm hoping that you will continue to write more. Am a bit disappointed and sad that this had finally come to an end. Your Naruto and Sasuke are pure LOVE and I must admit, I did cry.....ahem*...tear up a few times. T__T Wish you could write a sequel..even though there are no more plots in here. Lol! Anyway, I just want to thank you again for this. Have saved it for another future read. Please keep up teh wonderful work! <3

Sigh... this is about the kajillionth time I've reread this story. And every time I do, I feel compelled to review. I love this story. I see something new in it each time. The writing just kills me. I can't figure out how such hot sex scenes fit in so well with such an endearing story. I love watching their relationship grow and I get nervous when I know the bad parts that are coming. It's painful to read some of it, and then if I read those parts, I have to read until the finish.

I love Sasuke more and more in this. I mean Naruto doesn't change. He does, but not as much as Sasuke. And that's what's great is that Naruto's Sasuke's cornerstone and whatnot. *sniffles* I still think out of everything I have EVER read that this is the best story IN THE WORLD. I only wish you had written more, because I love all of what you write. Mm. And I love how you take care of the boys. I love authors who love them. *grabs tissue* Thanks again.