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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person rainbird
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo its ending. Well, I have really enjoyed your story. It's probably my favorite au story I have ever read. It was so beautifully written, and you were able to show emotions that often aren't discussed in fanfiction. Oh, and I loved the healthy dose of smut in nearly every chapter. Tactful smut, not just pwp. Yay for smut. Please write more stories! I will love you forever ^^
person just_me
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like WOW... your story kept me occupied for two days and I loved every minute I was reading it... all 32 chapters in two days. *happy sigh*
You should write a sequel to this... just a small one. Just so people can get a view on how Sas and Naru are doing. I also want to know Itachi's reaction to the smell of sex in his car. :P
You're a very good writer. I found a few grammar-errors here and there, but don't worry... it happens to the best. You gained yourself another adoring fan...namely me *cheers*
Keep the good work coming... ^__^V
person jelliott
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I reviewed before? I'm not entirely sure, but anyway...

So this delightful tale comes to an end. It's a slightly sad truth, but I believe this was a good place to end as well. Reading/watching the relationship you created between Naruto and Sasuke go through its ups and downs was both sweet and touching. I suppose that's why it's bit heartbreaking for this story to end. Thank you for writing it.

~Dirtyangel
person AsanoMatsuya
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! what a wonderful ending! :3 I loved it! Can't wait to go and browse your gallery...to see if there's any other interesting stories ^^ *claps* I applaud you!
person Hyang
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^________________^ All I can really do is just smile. You did a wonderful job and I sometimes look through your chapters to give me inspiration or motivation in my own stories. i respect you and even though im sad to see this story end, i also feel refreshed as im sure you are
person Mithros
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ this was a very good story thank you for writting it!!
person twisted-sheets
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It was a good ride, and I enjoyed very minute of it. I hope you continue writing, whatever form or pairing it would be!

*bows*

Thank you!

~twisted-sheets
person lo
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending to a great story. I hope you did not burn yourself out. Every chapter just got better, I loved how you developed the story line and I loved what you did with the characters. This story was sweet, funny, heart twisting, and HOT! This was handled so well. I aplaude yu and hope that one day you will write again. You are one of the few people that write at aff.net that seems to have actually read a book in thier life time. You are just amazing. Keep up the good work!!!
person caro8
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WUAHHHH!!! IT'S OVER!!!

Okay ignore my sudden meltdown. I have to tell you I love this story. From start to finish it was so worth the read. I've mentioned this before, but I go back and re-read my favorite chapters.

As for your ending, it was perfect. Their relationship was in a place that was optimal for an end. There really wasn't a need for you to continue to torture them. All loose ends don't have to be tied and closed for an ending to be good. I liked it, loved it actually. And now I shall worship you....

*throws herself down on her knees and begs*
person tsusami
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . . just. . wow. *speechless*

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