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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, ok i really loved the kakasasu, didn't expect it in this ficcie but its a bonus! ^^ The narusasu is really cute too, hehe can't wait to see more action between the two! Keep writing!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Atteng tng to review for the third time b/c AFF sucks...disregard this if I spam you. I'm only reposting because this fic needs some SERIOUS love...I can't believe more people haven't reviewed :)
Wow. That's all I have to say, WOW. Just re-read this sucker, and I'm still in love with the way you're writing Sas SasuNaru :) Good, good stuff. I especially like how you've kept the rivalry going, and you've resisted the urge to make them turn extremely OOC and fall into each other's arms. Sasuke is in pain and bitchy, which is appropriate...rather than going OMG Naruto saved me!, he's focused on how much he hates being weak. Very Sasuke, I like. Please give us more!
Wow. That's all I have to say, WOW. Just re-read this sucker, and I'm still in love with the way you're writing Sas SasuNaru :) Good, good stuff. I especially like how you've kept the rivalry going, and you've resisted the urge to make them turn extremely OOC and fall into each other's arms. Sasuke is in pain and bitchy, which is appropriate...rather than going OMG Naruto saved me!, he's focused on how much he hates being weak. Very Sasuke, I like. Please give us more!
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just...wow. I find this story extremely well-written. You keep them all SUCH in character, as well, which I appreciate. I really like the interaction between all the characters, especially Sasuke and Naruto. Please update soon, I look forward to it.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, you're writing is great! n_n I hope you write another story with the same coupling.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I read it on fanfiction.net and when I saw it here...I just had to read it again ^.^ I love the angsty detail...You are a very gifted writer!