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for Atsui Desu

by dragonflyelj

person jesslikewhoa
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you make sasu saku sound so good :)
person dire_wolf
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great nice wooohh*cheers* may I ask for a ShinoxHina fic please I'm dying to read one.. GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Wolf king
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah I LOVED IT, you should write more sasukeXsakura ,cause they are not that many. I hope you make a sequle.
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* It certainly does get hot in here. Phew~
person Sophie
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Best SasuSaku lemon I've ever read!
I really don't know where you could improve... well, liked a lot the "I am not finished with you yet" part ^^
Thanks for the fic, it's great. =)
person Kate
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was great, but I don't know if I missed any part, but... Did Sasuke unbind Sakura? *grins* Well I must have missed it. ^^
person Rookie
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A SasuSaku... I thought those were extinct....
person Lindsay
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, delicious. Very nice. Put a grin on my face!
person hime Suki
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I want to applaud your pairing; I LOVE Sasu/Saku pairings, and there are so few! Secondly, thank you for not making them little kids, instead maturing them to a reasonable intercourse age. I mean, 12 on 12 year old sex? Eh eh. 17? Oh yeah. Bravo!

Anyways, the only thing I didn't quite like was how she wok up and boom! There was Sasuke-kun right there ready to take her.

But I shall indeed shut up knowing that the fic was indeed a oneshot.

All in all, I give your wondeful Sasuke and Sakura-ness lemon fic a 5/5, 10/10, 100/100. However you want to take it, the point is it was worth reading.

Keep up the good work, okies? ^^
person secret_affair
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! Finaaly! a story without YOI! I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!! You are sooo talented in writing!!!!!!!!! WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I LOVE IT> NO WORDS CAN EXPLAIN MY FEELINGS RIGHT NOW!!!!!!

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