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OOO MAKE MORE MORE MORE BOUT SASUKE AND SAKURA! WITH LOTS OF LEMONNYYY!!!!!

Bravo! Bravo!!!!! ^^ one of the best one shots ive ever read,make sure to tell me about your next story!

i loved it! ^_-

Oh I liked it! It is so rare to find a nice het fic like this that I am glad I came across it...wait it's hard to find a m/f fic period x.x Again..very nicely done!

Woo! Hot lemon! Go SasuSaku! Go YOU!

Very nice. I enjoy Sasuke/Sakura and there is simply not enough of them out there. This is a welcome addition to that fandom though. Keep up the good work. :)

can't remember if I reveiwed so here goes.I liked the drowsy,sensual atmosphere you had at the begining,it set a receptive mood in this reader,cool water,warm sunshine,trickling creek.The best/appealing element in the fic was that she spoke up and told him what she wanted,it sure seemed to light a fire under him too.They where both playful yet there where no mind games,great.It sounded good(what they where doing),he sounded so good ,that and the chakra binding was hot.So were the looks in his eyes you described.Like he was feeling hot, open to her.All in all whats not to like!Umm some spelling mistakes but I am hardly one to talk but this is a reveiw so...more and good luck!

Absolutly awsome stroy!!! So cute So cute! I like the way your wrote Sasuke. You seemed to be able to keep him into Charicter, somthing a lot of people stuggle wiht for him. But you did it expertly! Also i loved the end when he tells her he loves her, it just makes your heart swell you know!

mmm hot. Normally don't like that pair (i just don't like Sasuke...well, or the real Sakura character for that matter) but it was really good.

Hi I love that pairing! This one-shot was great and I hope you make many more! PLEASE!!!! ~Love~ The Demonicslayer.