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for The Butterfly

by tealeaf

person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that's the first SasuSaku lemon I read that isn't a result of sasuke's agenda to rstore his clan, or rape, or some such. Thank goodness! Great morning after, by the way. ^_~
person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent! Encore! Encore!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy drunks! Yay! Lovely bit of writing there.
person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Sasuke's Ego and Conscience are effin' crazy!
person Kireiko
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is one good read that you have posted up here. I enjoyed your writing style (even if it was a bit spotted with spelling errors and mistakes - sorry!!) I loved the eventual pairing, even if i did think - ack. not another Kaka-Saku pairing!! But seriously, nice piece, definitely well worth the read in the end! Good job. (Although your ending was a bit simple, if not abrupt, in my honest opinion *wink* I am glad at the way you did it though.... )

Hope to see more from you.
person Macross
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! i"m sorry i didn't review all the chapters but i read and enjoyed everyone

Take care and keep writing
person Macross
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KICK ASS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ICAN"T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY FOR THE AWESOME STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TAKE CARE AND KEEP WRITING ^_^
person Elly
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored this fanfic! You write Sakura as I write her, I found it amazing how similar we are...which is probably why I loved your fanfic so much ;) I sat down and read it all in one night...let me tell you that took a while, lol.

I love the ending, and I'm even a KakaSaku fan! Of course I wouldn't have minded her to end up with the older guy either ;)

good job ^^
person Lc
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good! :x Sakura fictions are my fav. No matter who she ends up with (as long as it's not a woman :P)
person chl
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, man! the ending was a little too abrupt, but i love the story! i didn't think it was going to be SasuSaku at the beginning (which was why i read the fic in the first place -- i'm not partial to the pairing these days), but it worked out incredibly well. it was a nice tale, and while the characters are OOC (for Naruto universe anyway), i can totally picture them acting like this had they been this old (damn, do i need a life!). anyway, just want to let you know i think you did a really good job with this fic; my only real beef is with the typos, and i don't think that even qualifies as a criticism. keep up the good work!

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