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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person Eingeal
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
I really LOVE this fic !!
How you got the idea ? when i started to read the first 2 chapters I suddenly thought about the pictures of Kishimoto sensei with Naru Sasu Saku and Kakashi playing music ( I really was fond of that picture cause Naru had a piercing on the nose...cuuuuute....).
Anyway , go on!!!!! I'll always support you!-SasuNaru 4ever-
I'm looking forward next chapter ...
bye!!!
person cneko
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like. This story was interesting before, and I liked the SasuNaru...But then you went and made it GaaNaru !!! You get even more kudos for making it GaaNaru (sorta), *beams* Happy fangirl am I. Although...I must admit...Naruto seems to be a bit of a slut, but hey! What the hell, every band needs a slut and the boys can pass him around! *sweatdrops*

One piece of advice, though. You may want to try and get a beta or something. I noticed several things that could have been made better by a beta brush within the first few chapters, but you are difiantly getting better about it. ^_^
person Sdihypervelocity
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like you fic, it inspired me to do my own Gaara/Naruto type fic.
person LadyMoon
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww! that was just to cute. Please UPDATE soon.
person Rune
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! glad you liked the piccers. XD
I didnt reallie like gaara from the series felt super bad for him
But you managed to make him kyoot and curious espeically with is innocent lil
show me request *me likes* mwahhahhaha neijishika smutt goodies? *dances*
yess~ ooh i kno i have exam this week too *waves EXAM BANNER OF SUPPORT*
GOOD LUCKIES!!!!
person Shez
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* yay, another chapter! *gives SchizoIori a sticker* Gaara is so cute in this chapter! *hugs* What will the pairings be in this ficcy, anyway? Sasunaru? Nejinaru? GaaraNaru? @.@ So many cute couples to choose from! =DD
person Vampia Zee
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! New chapter! *does the New Chapter Dance*

Gah...Sasuke just accept it already!! *pokes him and shoves him in a closet with Naru-chan*

I know the feeling exams suck @___@ Mostly cuz i cant stay awake during them to save myself >.>; It like:

Teacher: *puts test infront of me*
Me: *stares at it.....5 mins later is sound asleep on desk*

They put me to sleep so fast @___@ I wish you the best of luck!! *does the Wish Luck Dance*
person FeatheredEdge
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah! great chapter. I can't wait for some gaara/naruto action!!! haha gaara can show that he wants naruto! take that Sasuke bastard! XDXDXD When's gaara gonna join their band?!
person Twilight Rose
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I was hoping Gaara would be an evil sex crazed fiend of pornish proportions. o_o .... Tee hee. Anyway, good build up chapter, I like how Sasuke's getting all cutely jealous. X3 Good luck on yexamexams!
person Kashshaptu
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn this is the best story ever, don't even have the words to describe how much I love this fic! I'm really anxious to see who will end up with Naruto in the end hehe, I hope it's Sasuke, but I like Neji too, and Gaara too! blah, can't there be like one big orgy hahahaha (ok don't take it too seriously, I can't help it but to think a foursome with all of them would be something nice hahaha) well, good luck on your exams and update soon! atw, tw, how do you do that? dissapearing in a puff of smoke?? haha teach me!

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