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by talutah

person FEdge
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm back to cheer you on some more! Great new chapter, its actaully kinda sweet! but its so short! more more more! please?!
person Sailor Tiamat
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pumps fist into air* Hell Yeah!!! ^^ Your a wonderful author. I have an idea. You can include it in this fic or make a new one. But the pairing is Naruto/Sakura. I want Naruto to ACT like a demon while mating and nail Sakura like the horny fox demon he is. ^^ I'm a hentai I know but who would get hot thinking of Naruto nipping at their flesh with his fangs and running his claws over their body...*shudder* I better stop. ^_^;; I want to read him nailing her fox-style. ^_______^ Well thats my idea. But anyway, I like where you are taking this and I hope you update soon!!!!!
person Pesha
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that my slashy little heart is loving your portrayal of this love triangle. Their situation is just remarkably poignant the way that you write it. I can feel sympathy for Naruto for being so desperate while loving the cynical bastard Sasukr usr using that same desperation to justify his own amoral actions. My favorite scene so far was where Naruto just sighed and pulled Sasuke to him after he was confronted with own own double standard. It was just a wonderfully human way of handling the scene. I can't wait to see what Sasuke's proposition turns out to be. (Well, I can guess what it will be, but it's really all about the phrasing in the end, right? Thousands of people use the same boy meets girl plotline, but in the end, it is the one that has the best phrasing that really stands out.) I look forward to seeing more from you. *sends fab author huggles and chocolate kisses*
person Suzuko
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi you need to write more on this I really like it and it keeps getting intersting by the chapter please write more soon
person FEdge
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YA! more chapters! but still not enough! I want to read more! so please continue as soon as you can!
person writegirl
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! I wanna know what they plan to work out! The love triangle between these three characters has been driving me crazy since I got into naruto, I want to know what you propose as a solution. ^_~
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was steamy, sexy, hot, & poetic. I think I'm in love ^^ I'm looking forward to future chapters.
person SSB
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh!!!!! Sooooo great! Of course, there are no rules now....soooo perfect!!! Ahhhhhh!!!!!
I love it! Hehehehehe!!! Update soon!
person FEdge
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yahoo! I've been waiting for something like this! seriously, the triangle is the perfect fanfic plot for naruto [at least I think it is!]but it seems hardly anyone has tried their hand at it! and so far so good! [really good ^____^ ] whoa, can't belive naruto got away with that! well, not really got away, but got thru! heh heh, this story shows so much promise, so please continue asap!

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