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continuuuuuue! >o<

even though it's dark and... yeah, it's awesome!!!

come oooooonnnnn, this fic's so good, you've GOT to continue!! XO

I'm going crazy heeere.... *gives you a plate of cookies for encouragement*

Yosh... *blinks* This is a lot heavier than the summary impliWow.Wow... I am... speechless. There's really nothing to say. Well, one thing at least. This definately belongs at this site. If there was one fic that without-a-doubt should be here, this is it. Again, wow... I want to compliment you, I really do, but I truly can't think of anything to say. It's blown me away. Update soon, please, I'd really love to see how this plays out.
~A spellbound slave of your deep fictions, Bealmira
Wow...

OMG...this is by far the greatest fic that I've read...I actuallly cried. Its so dark and beautiful. I do hope that all is well in the end...and Kaka/Iru

You piece of Sh*t! This story made me cry!! It's...It's just so sad and dark and just beautly wly written.

*happy* YES!!! I'm so glad I found this fic again. Loved it even more after rereading!

Please tell me you'll be updating soon?! Please!!!!!

Dear lord! Poor Iruka-chan! Please let it be a happy ending! ~BTW~ lil dark but good don't get me wrong here ^.^

Dear lord! Poor Iruka-chan! Please let it be a happy ending! ~BTW~ lil dark but good don't get me wrong here ^.^

OH! Finish it please!

If kakashi means scarecrow, and ka is mosquito, his name can't really mean mosquito, can it? (Mosquito-mosquito-teacher?) I don't see why you can't just use the untranslated names anyway, since it's what would be.. common I guess, and fit a story with a serious topic like this better anyway. But if you have to translate them why not use the actual translation? Masashi Kishimoto likes to give his characters names with a pun, as we know. Kakashi's would be 'scarecrow', with his last name adding to the pun.

Well, I am trying to say if you mistranslated something it's better to correct the mistake instead of trying to find ways around it.