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You can't, just can't leave it there. This is a really captivating and in character story! It defienetly one of the best that I have ever read. There are a few words here and there are are missing or mixed together but the plot and content more then make up for it. Even if you may not continue this I want to say that it's a wonderful and amazing fan fic. I really adore all your work.

This is a good slice of... crack.
Please finish!!!! ;.; i will cry like a girl if you dont XD

I'm just writing to let you know people are still reading this fic, since it looks like it may never be finished. That would be a shame since it's such a lovely little story. I like how it teeters between humor and angst. Sasuke acting the mother hen is just sort of funny. Especially when in the next moment he's worrying over what to do about Kyuubi's behavior. The interaction of Naruto and Kyuubi is particularly sweet and it's interesting how much the fox listens to the boy. Sasuke's a little OOC in this, but considering all the things that DIDN't happen, I can believe it. "Innocent" Naruto is adorable and Kyuubi has become my favorite character in this fic. I also like that the "division" was an apparent accident, and not some plot by Orochimaru or Itachi, allowing the focus to be on the beauitful dynamic in the relationship of Naruto, Sasuke, and Kyubi. While it seems this will probably never be complete, I'm still hoping you may decide to return to it so I can find out what happens. I've read a lot of fanfiction, and this is one of my favorites.

No updates since 2004? Was I reading that correctly? Gah! I want more! *Goes on to read more of your stuff* Stayed up half the night just to finish this, great job, and I hope Naruto and Sasuke work out ok... even if Kyubi has to get rough ^_^

I really really love this story. I hope it hasnt been abandoned cause it is the best fic for this pairing I've ever read. Plus that cliffhanger is just evvviiilllll. *sends inspiration glitter your way* hope to see more :)

I really really love this story. I hope it hasnt been abandoned cause it is the best fic for this pairing I've ever read. Plus that cliffhanger is just evvviiilllll. *sends inspiration glitter your way* hope to see more :)

I've been waiting forever for you to continue this story. Please don't abandon it now, it was going so good. Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please. **hint - I want you to continue**

Please don't abandon this story, it was off to such a good start and I want to see how it ends.

Why won't you update T^T I'm dying to know what happens next your story really hooked me! Please update soon i've been waiting for too long T^T

Holy...crap... I love it! Please continue! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^-^ I love the story line so far. Very intresting, and I've never seen or thought of that bafore. Keep up the good work! I can't wait until the next chapter!

~Akira~