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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good so far but you stated that this makes sense best with the group being genin but at that age it would make more sense being chuunin especially since they would still be in the same team.
All i really have to say though is keep it up
All i really have to say though is keep it up
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please that cliffhanger on chapter 5 is killing me. Oh well these chapters are great anyway, once again keep it up :)
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously that was a spectacular 1st chapter. Teh ending wasnt that bad and you deserve a million reviews... just try not to copy the same word so much
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you still plan on updating this?
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't leave us hanging is hinata pregnat, what's going on please update
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I like this fic a lot. Great storyline and a very very interesting and captivating plot. Hope the next chapter is up soon.
Farezzz
Farezzz
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
vomiting eh? that is sign of pregnancy tsk tsk thats what happens when you dont use protection... well cant wait for the next chappie so update soon :D
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want another chapter! IT'S BEEN UP FOR SO LONG ^_^ IT ROCKS!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was great