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October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one was good, I really enjoyed it. The hesitancy was very believeable and the pace of the chapter was nice. Great job!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great storyline. I also think the lemon was perfect. Great idea concept whith cloud city.i look forward to reading more
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story hope you update soon.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah.. reading old fanfics.. this one is fantastic but there isn't an icecubes chance in hell it will be continued. Why is it the good ones that die? :-(
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm, not too bad, but you forgot that it was cloud that tried to kidnap hinata for the byakugan.
Other than that, are u ever going to write again?? It's been years since your last update...I'm about ready to hold ur funeral...
Other than that, are u ever going to write again?? It's been years since your last update...I'm about ready to hold ur funeral...
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your story.. Your right about the age 12 yrs old an jumping into a relationship like that would be very hard but at least they could of been right after the time skip and they were to be attacked a bit more than I can see that.. Hope you update soon. PLEASE CONTINUE
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update don't let this great story die T-T
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story but its sad how you let it die man. I hate it when i see authors let good stories just drift away.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kinumi? You appear to have spellt "God" wrong. :) Great fic, I love it. More soon!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing.