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Reviews for Naruto’s Dreamworld

By : HumpTheBump
  • From ANON - Please continue on July 02, 2022

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  • From CarnyWritings on May 02, 2022

    Wow, I've read all your stories, I'm simply adoring the incredibly lewd worlds you're building! These are very fun fanfics, with a delightful premise and just the best payoff, with a pure wish fulfilment for the characters! I just am adoring it all. Both the sexual conquest and how simply... overpowering the guys feel, to the sensation of willing control they have. Here are a few of my suggestions, since you've asked for them:

    -I'd love to see what Hinata's up to in this world. If in the normal canon she already loves Naruto, I 100% see her trying to start some sort of religion involving Naruto, focusing on the pure worship people have for him. Giving him money, possessions, and of course, their bodies for him. Besides that, I see her trying to become his 'wife' as for the women in the world, besides being his cumdumpster, they'd probably love to be his wives. Or be anything that he orders around.

    -Besides that, sexy Kurama would be amazing. Not a furry, just a woman with fox ears, always in his mind, pushing Naurto to be more pervy. Possibly in the angle of corruption, but with the world and the guy enjoying the corruptive propieties.

    -Naruto would probably remember that Tsunade isn't around. While I don't think he should be hokage just yet, make it so like he just doesn't want the position at the moment because he wants to enjoy other things before following his 'dream'. But he needs a nice place, so he can order Tsunade to come back and also order her to give him the entire Senju clan. Besides that, opening up positions for maids around the clan, and getting slutty women to compete for the glory of being his slaves would be a fantastic idea.

    These are just a couple of the ideas I have. Oh, and also, what's your ao3 username, I saw you mentioning you had one of those, and I'd love to read your other stories!


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  • From fallenkami on April 02, 2022

    Here are some ideas for you.

    Ayame, food sex. She as underwear made of Ramen noodles. She cums or pees inside Naruto's Ramen. Naruto cums in a bowl of food and she eats it.

    Since Naruto knows that Sakura would be a good medic, he immediately suggests her to become a medic. Even though she really doesn't need to be a medic to have a slutty nurse outfit, she still should be.

    Ino invites Naruto over to her families nursery. She tells him that they should have sex outside among the plants, so that their cum acts like fertilizer.

    Hinata or Kurenai could become Naruto's live in maid, who gets repeatedly punished for messing up. I really want it to be Kurenai.

    Temari, be used by Wind country or the sand village as a bargaining chip. Pretends to be defiant against her fiance, but secretly loves being punished.

    After the failed invasion on the leaf village by Sound and Sand, Naruto gets some slaves. From Sound it's Kin, Guren, and Tayuya. From Sand it's Temari, female Gaara, and female Kankuro. Or only Temari is offered up, the other two are still males.

    Shizuka comes to the leaf village earlier to challenge Naruto. Still loses, but says with Naruto, trying to be his wife.


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  • From fallenkami on April 01, 2022

    OK no furries got it, it was just an idea, didn't really care for it. The BDSM on the other hand I would have liked but I understand.

    Glad you liked my tsunade idea. You don't have to wait for when she shows up normally. Naruto gets "sick" and needs treat, who better than to be his personal nurse/doctor than Tsunade. So she is summoned back home. After getting "cured" Naruto plays around of the poker game I mentioned. One of the steaks for the game could be Tsunade staying.

    So that frees up the Inuzuka females and Kurenai.

    I saw that piss drinking was mentioned. Why not just do watersports, aka piss play? I'm thinking Naruto decides to mark the 3 Inuzuka females with his piss to show that they are his property. Like how a dog piss on a tree to mark its territory. 

    Kurenai, giving Naruto his first anal experience.


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  • From MastaK on March 31, 2022

    yes I was talking about the younger ones, very nice, not sure if you know what a naizuri is, just incase it's basically a flat chested titfuck, so you can have them do that to him too, also will he impregnate women with more daughters for him to fuck aswell? would be really hot, and please no futas, looking forword with what else you will write


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  • From fallenkami on March 24, 2022

    I want a chapter where a milf or milfs are breast feeding Naruto. It could be one milf were she is using a jutsu to produce an endless supply of breast milk or it could be several milfs changing places to feed. And while they are breast feeding him they are giving him a handjob (if its one milf) or blowing him (if its more than one milf). It quickly evolves into sex or orgy.

    A chapter where Naruto into a werefox and gets it on with female Kiba, Hana, and Tsume. It could be after a weird female Orochimaru chapter, Naruto being a werefox due to an experiment.

    A BDSM chapter were Kurenai is the master and dominating Naruto. And I want real pain in this one, no light slapping shit. 

    A chapter were Naruto retrieves Tsunade. Tsunade agrees to come back if Naruto wins a card game against her. It starts off as strip poker, with Naruto winning the majority of the hands, but losing some (not on purpose). When Tsunade loses all her clothes, Shizune continues the game by having it extend to her; if Tsunade loses a hand, Shizune has to strip. After Shizune loses her clothes, Naruto this time offers to extend the game more, by allowing them to offer up actions. For example Tsunade could bet a handjob and when she loses she give Naruto one. Or Tsunade offer up allowing Naruto to drink her breast milk. Or offering up drinking Naruto's urine. I think it would be best if this was a long and drawn out chapter, starting with Tsunade pushing Shizune to play, but when she loses, Tsunade takes over.

    I want a lesbian chapter were Naruto turns into Naruko and has sex with another female, could be Ino, Temari, Samui, ect.


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  • From MastaK on March 23, 2022

    very hot, would love to see some loli's getting fucked, make sure to have titfucking, and them drinking his piss too while your at it, and it's basically perfect


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