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Reviews for Baransu Byou, Chunin exams

By : Menasker
  • From RealRen on January 04, 2020

    Really good,hope to see more soon!


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  • From PennilessRonin on December 27, 2019

    Have to say that I'm really liking this so far: the clash of the sensei being used to this, enjoying it while the students are new to it, really discovering their own kinks while also kinda piggybacking off the adults attitude is hot af.

    To put a vote forward: Temari. I don't know if this is a roving POV or what, but the idea of Naruto happening upon a stretching Temari where he decides to test his limits, see if a Suna kunoichi would help stabilize his chakra? Sounds hot to me, especially if it turns out that being a Jinchuriiki fucks with his stabilization in some way.

    Still, this story should be fun. A unique idea with a lot of fun ways to play around with it (kunoichi who despise helping chakra stabilization and are therefore dominant/quick with demeaning insults, kunoichi that treat it like a job like randomly sucking off a shinobi in a semi-public place is normal, kunoichi who make a profit off of it since they're so hot or talented that stabilizing your chakra with them is a privilege and not a right, etc...)


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  • From Ookami88 on December 27, 2019

    Pretty interesting start, good writing style. My personal preference for the next girl would be for Hinata, the best scenario would be if she had to 'help' more than just her team members.


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