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Reviews for The Legendary Sucker Chronicles

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From summerss on May 31, 2017

    Glad I found this! With a nicname like that I am suprised more stories like this arent out there.


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  • From ANON - Lily on November 06, 2016

    This fic really grew the beard in the second half.  The first half was awful, as porn, it was boring, the first sex scene was dubcon without dubcon's usual emotional intensity, and the second sex scene had too much math in it.

    The second half is good as a dark erotic drama.  Kunio's backstory might have featured a well worn trope, but it feels emotionally real, I can see how he is emotionally deranged.

    Kunio has a really screwy view of rape as being a fate worser than death, since it sounds like he wanted his sister to be put out of her misery as early as the end of the gang rape (how about her walking away from that?).  Rape is a worser crime to commit than murder, but in terms of fate, I rather be a rape survivor than dead (I might sometimes think otherwise if I were ever to suffer penetrative rape instead of the run of the mill gropings and verbal threats, but I will probably eventually pull out of it to find enjoyment in life again, most survivors do).  He could have, should have, saved his sister.  If she was working 40 hours shifts, even if all she was doing was paper-pushing, she would still be insane because people need sleep, if he had only took his nee-san out of there she would have been much better after a week of proper food and sleep.

    The dark erotica part sizzles in the second half, I found Tsunade begging Kunio to let her come in the beginning to be kinda trite, but starting when someone reached around Tsunade to squeeze her nipples, it got hot.

    The gang rape was well written, and the gang's suggested ending was fiendishly clever and cruel (and realistic, sadly, real life victims have been dismissed as whores before).  ...and here, the Math Monster strikes again, but it wasn't as bad as last time.

    ...and..this "Technically, he was still raping her, and Tsunade wasn't so mind fucked as to believe that there was a genuine connection here. But, given the alternatives, this was the lesser evil."  this line makes it real.

    //forcing as much of it as possible up into her love canal //  I highly advise you not to use the term 'love canal' here, as this paragraph is from Tsunade's perspective, I could see one of the gang calling it that, but this paragraph is from her right?  It detracts from the rest of the paragraph.

    //“The dirt munchers have been very consistent with restocking from Konoha// Konoha, which they hate, eeep!

    I seem to recall that Iwa was extremely tight fist with money, so Tsunade would definitely have to be working groups and taking them three at a time to earn her owners money.

    This fic has really gotten good, you can feel Tsunade's emotional intensity.  That outfit she is in gives me the shivers.


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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2015
    This is extremely hot! I don't see too many stories where Tsunade is forced to repay her debts with any sort of plot involved, but you are doing a fantastic job! Kudos! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2015
    ...or are you scared?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2015
    finish fatman.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2015
    really good at the start but I guess as it progress it just started to find the story lime to be unsatisfying but that is just my opinion haha I think that I just don't like the amount of physical abuse that this has in the last couple of chapter sorry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2015
    i have to say thi is a great piece of work
    beings me back good memories of tsunade`s debt and does feel a perfect succesor as tsunade is betrayed none other but herself who she has only to blame for her situation

    keep going i would love to see more of this
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  • From ANON - Ddinbych on September 29, 2015
    Just wait until he finds out tsunades life hasn't been all sunshine and roses. She lost her loved ones she thoughtshe was the last senju when I think under other circumstances she would have been happy to find out she had family left. I know from experience that being an orphan is no joke. Heck you could even have a chap where she explains that she searched for senju and she once followed a rumour about a flower girl and her brother but when she got the place they supposedly lived there was no one there. I make this suggestion because as an orphan I find it hard to believe that she wouldn't try to find members of her family no matter how distant. I like the story its not just porn it has a nice plotline as well. That and the dude has to realize at some point that his anger is misplaced and I hope he realizes this before its too late for them to be a family. Although depending on your tsunade it might be too late. Again nice story and looking forward to seeing new chapters

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2015
    Really enjoying the story so far and am looking forward to seeing where it is going from here. I was just wondering if there is going to be any Body Modification in the future for Tsunade or not?
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  • From Maiteya2 on September 26, 2015
    Wow you get really prolific in short bursts, huh? Glad you're remaking the 5th Long Week, was always a favorite of mine. Looking forward to see your spin on this!
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  • From ANON - TheSinful on September 23, 2015
    Your explanation in chapter 4 reminds me of a comedy where Naruto manages to secure all of Tsunade's debt (not that she knows it's him). And when she refuses to make any payments, he kidnaps Shizune and leaves a memo that given how much someone of Shizune's ability is worth, factoring out room and board costs, Tsunade's debt would be paid off in roughly a thousand years of Shizune working for him. Think he eventually took pretty much all of Konoha's ninjas but "graciously" allows them to be used by Konoha, except doing so prevents the debt from decreasing and actually increases it since they're being hired from him now.
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  • From ANON - Thesinful on September 23, 2015
    I recall a mention in the manga (during the search for Tsunade) that said ten ryo was about one USD. Or more accurately that the 300 ryo Jiraiya let Naruto keep from his wallet was worth about 30USD.
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  • From CompleteDomination on September 23, 2015
    Darn it, it's Ahegao Hokage, isn't it?
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  • From ANON - thesinful on September 23, 2015
    You mean no one guessed Ahegao Hime or Ahegao Hokage?
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  • From CompleteDomination on September 23, 2015
    Okay, a few more gueses besides Ahegao Hentai Tobaku Jo(Fucked-Silly Porn Gambling Hall). I'll also guess Animated Hentai Tobaku Jo(Real Port Gambling Hall. Ahegao Humilitation Tobaku Jo(Fucked-Silly and Humiliation Gambling Hall). I know those last two aren't exactly japanese, but I'm actually bothered because I can't seem to find the answer.
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