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Reviews for Bat Anbu

By : Blackkitten23
  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 21, 2015
    lol Naruto questioning Kakashi.

    One thing about your stories though... Naruto is so skilled and powerful at ridiculously young ages. It's like his life stinks but his skills and talent are overwhelmingly easy. It makes it seem that things will always go his way in battle so there isn't really any tension when reading about his fights because of course he will easily win. It's like when you watch a battle in a movie... the viewer is tense and into it because there is the possibility that someone might be hurt or killed or they will have a major setback that with set up the next problem in the story. All the tension in your stories focus on the relationship issues between Naruto and those around him but the fighting scenes do not have much. Just something to keep in mind as you plan out more scenes. I look forward to seeing your writing develop.
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  • From Gemini-Spark on June 21, 2015
    Stop spamming Yaoi stories i don't have anything against gay people but i don't want to read about them

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  • From smint45 on June 21, 2015
    that was nice^^ I liked the konversation with the double meanings^^ Can't wait to see how they will react when they find out he is blind^^ See you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - rose on June 21, 2015
    update soon please thank you
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 20, 2015
    A very authorative Naruto? I like that. This story has a lot of promise. I'm liking it.
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  • From smint45 on June 19, 2015
    nice new story!!! I like handikaped thig^^ Can't wai to see were you are going with this!!!!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 18, 2015
    I agree with Misatos Pen Pen. Kakashi and Naruto would be a mmm- mmm! Yummy.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 18, 2015
    Yet another great fanfic. I just love it. The only problem I can't decide whitch story I like best. They're all so good!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 18, 2015
    Can't wait to see how he gets involved with Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - rose on June 18, 2015
    next chapter please
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