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Reviews for Opalescence

By : Blackkitten23
  • From jamescun on August 22, 2015
    Plz write more soon I love this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2015
    Is kakashi being cruel to Naruto for something that is not his doing? Or is kakashi being a dick because he just needs an escape goat to get his anger out on? Please update soon. I love 10 of your stories. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - rose on July 18, 2015
    update please thanl you
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  • From smint45 on July 18, 2015
    That was great!!! Finally neji can't take naruto away^^ See you again soon!!!
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  • From Wilder_T on July 13, 2015
    Please update this.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 28, 2015
    Poor kawaii Minato. He really wants a piece of Naruto. Maybe he should ask. Wow Narutos first kill? Good thing he has Minato to confort him. Wink. Wink.
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  • From smint45 on June 28, 2015
    That was great!!! I'm glad Minato didn't think naruto is nuts a he tells him he can talk to trees^^ Thanks a lot for the update and see you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - rose on June 22, 2015
    update soon please thank you
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  • From ANON - smint45 on June 22, 2015
    Great Chapter^^ I liked how the grass turned into a wappon^^ See you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 22, 2015
    Now this... this story line is really really interesting. I think this is the best plot I've read from the stories you have on here (though I admit I haven't read all of them). And what a plot it is. It's very original making Naruto an orphan from someone other than the Uzumaki's and his plant affinity is unique. Naruto's test was still too easy for him but I really like that he has this mysterious past that brings up a lot of questions and possibilities. Sakura is ever annoying but that's normal. Sasuke is a bit of the extreme spoiled brat which would partially be explained by his clan still being around... but would he really be that stupidly arrogant and ignorant especially with an older brother like Itachi to look up to and impress?

    Anyway... I also like that you have Kakashi ignoring Naruto and giving misleading reports about him but not actively abusing him. It's also great that we don't know why Kakashi is being that way. It is something that shouldn't be given away too soon. I like the fact that you are not solving everything so quickly in this but the plot is still progressing :)
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 22, 2015
    More pwease?
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 13, 2015
    Hmm what is going on? Why does Kakashi seem to hate Naruto? Hmmmm. Great job thumbs up!
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  • From smint45 on June 13, 2015
    Really nice^^ I like Minato in this^^ Wonder why kakashi hates Naruto.... See you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - smint45 on June 08, 2015
    Great I loved this chapter^^ So this will probably a minatoxnaruto too^^ I'm glad!!! Soo can't wait for more^^ Since already qiute late in my timezone I will have to read your other updates tomorrow^^ See you!!!!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 08, 2015
    Another chapter well written.The way you portray Naruto is so cool. Smart,but not snotty smart. The mystery jonin had me going crazy until the end. Ah, very clever of you.I would never have guessed who it was. Minato seems smitten with the young Uzumaki. Could love be in the air ?I wonder.
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