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Reviews for When Sparks Fly

By : Blackkitten23
  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on June 21, 2015
    I really like the story seemed a little rushed nut all together a great story hope to see more of you in the future!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 18, 2015
    What an amazing chapter! So Konoha got what they deserved? About time , after all they asked for it. Is there more?
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 13, 2015
    Nooo! They have Alt! If he wakes up all hell will break loose. I hope Minato and Kushina don't erase Alts memories. You have me all revved up now. I just have to find out what happens next. BTW great chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 11, 2015
    I love the way you write. This chapter is soooo cool. Sigh so much for Alt's plan. That. Kakashi, he should've mined his business. Minato and Kushina are in for a rude awakening. I think my fav part was were the hokages kissed. So funny.
    Another thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 11, 2015
    Not feeling sorry for Alts/Narutos parents. Other than that not much to say ,but great chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 07, 2015
    Not much to say,except great chapter. I wonder if Alt will go through and kill his parents.The plot sickens. Lol.

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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 05, 2015
    wow Alts established himself as a cloud nin. Awesome !! He was looking out for the raikage. Dude, that threesome was kinky! The idea of three guys going at it like that? What were you thinking? I like. I like. That had my complete attention. My only complaint would be is the scene was too short.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 03, 2015
    Another chapter well done. Love the gore mixed in with the angst.A present,how cute!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 02, 2015
    Wow. Naruto's family noticed him? About time. Too bad its too late. Poor guy really freaked out. Now I'm wanting fried rice. Mmm,yummy.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 01, 2015
    oh, Blinky ye will be missed. You will be avenged! This chapter rocks.That torture scene was creepy... I like it! Wonder when Minato and Kushina will realize that Naruto ius behind the disapeance. Until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on May 31, 2015
    I like this. Don't know where you're going with it ,but this story looks pretty intresting. A crazed Naruto running around is a cool idea. I wonder if hell be paired with someone equally crazy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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