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Reviews for The Kitsune and the dragon

By : sneaky666
  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2016
    Great. But by god, the grammar
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  • From ANON - majin king on August 07, 2015
    Hey, if you want i could try to make your chapters easier to read if you want. i just need to find a way to send them to you

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  • From ANON - HUMO145 on July 04, 2015
    MORE CHAPTER PLEASE
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  • From ANON - anon on May 31, 2015
    A crossover between two series is difficult enough without adding a third. While I like the concept, you need a beta reader to do some extensive grammar checking. Is English your first language?
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  • From ANON - Bladefly on May 29, 2015
    Out of curiosity, do u plan to turn issei's Alpha pheromones and attraction as a weapon against woman. Cause I can seriously see the Riser peerage going crazy if naruko were to allow issei to blast them with his pheromones
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  • From TheWarlockofChaos on May 29, 2015
    Nice job Sneaky666 on the lemon. I would have said congrats on the chapter but... it was pretty much all lemon though that really isn't a problem whatsoever (I enjoyed it actually). It also appears you are getting better at English seeing as how there was only a few incorrect gender pronouns like say five or so throughout the chapter. Basically, the biggest issue that I can see is the sentence structure which I am pretty sure you are improving anyway.

    P.S. Great Job and keep up the good work Sneaky666
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  • From TheWarlockofChaos on May 20, 2015
    I am not really much for yuri but I like the introductions of Issei's future harem girls. Also nice way of fitting them into the setting.
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  • From ANON - soue mikoto on May 14, 2015
    Love the story but is naruko only going belong to isse? I'm curious because of the tags.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2015
    I really like the start, though the grammar leaves much to be desired. I just hope to see Issei actually become dominant, and that he doesn't become a servant of Rias since it would make the whole thing quite impossible.
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  • From ANON - reads10hrs/day on May 14, 2015
    While the story is a unique one, one that I quite like, you need to run this through a spell-check and extensive grammar check. I suggest a beta that is good at English. Nobody enjoys reading when the grammar looks like a five-year old child made it.
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  • From TheWarlockofChaos on May 13, 2015
    Nice idea Sneaky666, I look forward to seeing where you take this. Naruko's brocon obsession is quite amusing and the fact that Issei's scent arouses Youkai is great. Maybe Issei will also have Kuroka and Yasaka in his harem along with some possible others such as Serafall, Gabriel, and cuckolding Sirzechs and taking Grayfia.

    P.S. How are you doing on "The unforgettable escort mission of Kushina"? I would really like to see an update on it if the next chapter is ready.
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