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Reviews for Naruko The Rare One

By : BoH56
  • From ANON - j on March 30, 2015
    you are not switching sakura for hinata
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  • From ANON - Obikidoragon on March 29, 2015
    What took you so long?! Can't wait till the Wave arc. Hopefully it goes faster even with some of your other stories.
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  • From Meta1213 on March 01, 2015
    I really like this story it's good smut with a little story but not enough to kill the smut just enough to keep me wanting to read more and for a reason other then just seeing who is going to bang Naruko next though that is a reason. Also please get rid of Sakura and bring in Hinata I just can't stand the pink girl. Also it would be kinda cool if Hinata starts out shy but after having sex with Naruko becomes more like her RTN movie self minus the death threats to everyone but Sakura.
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  • From Vappourider on February 04, 2015
    Nice story I am enjoying please update soon
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  • From ANON - ta on January 04, 2015
    Please continue story
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  • From Cryo-Soldier on December 07, 2014
    I'm incredibly excited for this story. I hope to see more soon! Even though you stated that there won't be much plot to this story I do like a bit of drama, so long as you keep the pure sexiness that you have already established. Can't wait for more, from both this story and your others.
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  • From ANON - KTlovesmoney on December 01, 2014
    How about making Haku "A Rare One" when going into the Wave Mission, so Naruko isn't so alone?
    Also he/she could use his/her Ice-Bloodline to make an Ice-Strapon, Ice-Dildos, or in other Kinky ways.
    And will Naru-(to/ko)'s Three Little Admirers (Konohamaru/Moegi/Udon) make any appearances?
    Also will Hinata's Little Sister Hanabi be in your Fanfic? And will Hinata be Shy, Not so Shy, or maybe Not Shy at All?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2014
    considering they would still need to make the soup to cook the noodles and other ingredients the cum ramen should be more expensive since it takes extra time and effort added on to make.


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  • From ANON - rsfan on November 24, 2014
    love the smut but you should make a chapter on naruko taken by the villagers
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  • From ANON - darkshark on November 23, 2014
    switch sakura for she is useless.
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  • From Bloodwolf432 on November 23, 2014
    Switch them, but make Hinata a suppressed dom that is unleashed with Naruko. Just having sex gets stale so there needs to be a bit of spice added in to keep it good.
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  • From Bloodwolf432 on November 15, 2014
    Pretty good, but you should give a bit more detail on some of the small things. Like the size of their dicks, it's more/less erotic to know if she's getting railed by someone who's well endowed or taking it from a small one.
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  • From ANON - Colshan on November 15, 2014
    Yeah I read the end there,and well it really killed the mood of the story. It was rather sad at the end there.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2014
    Your right thisis pure smut keep it that way
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  • From ANON - Xeno on November 14, 2014
    MOAR MOAR MOAR

    We need futa. This place is a swarm of Yaoi and abuse fics. Give us more of the good stuff man!
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