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Reviews for The Thin Line Between Love and Hate - COMPLETE

By : kizukatana
  • From ANON - RyuArashi on December 19, 2014
    Loved,this very much..well written, in depth..you could feel Naruto's and Sasuke's pain radiating from the pages..I'm so glad Sakura didn't get away with her perfidy..Jealousy is an ugly emotion. Thanks for the beautiful story..
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  • From ANON - RyuArashi on September 14, 2014
    This was a great story...well written, filled with angst and a surprising twist..you captured the anguish people go through when an especially intense relationship ends unexpectedly...and I'm glad Sakura is paying for her misdeeds...I especially like the fact that Naruto was able to pull himself together..great story..good job!
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  • From WonderMint on July 07, 2014
    I avoided reading this story for a while due to the description, and broke down only because I like your other work. I have to say that I'm stunned. It was an uncomfortable read in places, but the content was far from the random freak-outs for the sake of angst that one often sees. The payoff in the end is big, building an entirely different character dynamic with different emotional experiences than the characters ordinarily afford. With, perhaps, even more intensity.

    I. think the biggest surprise, though, is that the journey the characters take touched a real personal chord with me. Hotness aside, I have some real thinking to do about my own life after having read this. Writing a work that resonates with your readers on a deeper level while pretending to write smut is an accomplishment that you should take real pride in. You have managed to chip off a little sliver of real humanity and infuse it into your characters, on a stage ordinarily occupied with wooden puppets. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2014
    Wow! Just spent the weekend reading this. Loved it!! The characterisations were perfect, and I loved the storyline. It was romantic, but it showed some real-life understanding about what it take to keep a relationship strong. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - secretwriter on June 14, 2014
    omgggg you write amazing smut! I so wish this story wasn't over! Would love to see a follow up, with them adopting a kid!

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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 10, 2014
    aww i loved this story im happy that things worked out and that there is a child in there future.
    great job and please keep up the good work on other stories
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on May 08, 2014
    I really enjoyed your fic! To be honest, I didn't think that I would. I generally don't like fics that are too angsty. Your story was a perfect blend of love and hate! When you began writing of how Sasuke was treating Naruto, I thought that there was no way to redeem him. However, Naruto found a way to forgive him, and I did too. The sex scenes were top-notch, too. Thank you for sharing your fic with us!
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  • From ANON - kit on May 07, 2014
    aw man! the end??
    ....is there going to be a sequel?
    I was curious to see if and how the relationship between hinata/itachi and sakura/lee would develop. I also got really excited with the mention of adopting. I'd love to see the kid they would adopt.
    oh well....fantastic story! I really enjoyed it
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 30, 2014
    please plasee update again soon !!!! i love this story and am drooling at what is to come! please please update again soon
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  • From ANON - LadyPerv on April 29, 2014
    love love loved this chapter.
    Everything meshed so well, their self-explanation of those emotional trauma, their reactions together. It's all the thoughts and little personal tidbits that I as a reader really appreciates cause it makes the story that much more realistic and enjoyable. I don't know what else to say i just loved everything! I liked Naruto's independence and i now feel like Sasuke deserves to get screwed to high heaven for his patience has paid off. Can't wait for it :D

    Sucks balls about the other story getting taken down. And i totally had it bookmarked too!! Dont let a silly complaint get you down oh great Kami-sama!!

    I shall wait patiently until ur next update,
    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Reithra on April 29, 2014
    So why did they take down Nice Guys Finish Dead Last... and I finshed reading this on ff.net I have to say you are one of the most amazing writers that I have ever had the pleasure of reading material from. This story made me bawl like a little girl it was crazy. Thank you for such a great story. If you want to reply back to me my email is on this as well
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  • From ANON - kit on April 29, 2014
    ah!! it has happened ....well, at least it will happen. I look forward to the next chapter! (just to let you know-there are doubles of what you wrote in this chapter. like you read the chapter and then the same chapter is right below your warning of 'hard yaoi' coming up).

    now, I am off to read your other story on ff.net. I can't believe they took it down....so strange. I'm curious what the complaint was.....about the reviews? I don't really understand why that would warrant the story being taken off.
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  • From ANON - LadyPerv on April 24, 2014
    kami-sama!!! thank you for granting me the privilege of reading another chapter.
    i'm reviewing again simply because i am shamelessly hooked.

    throughout this chappie it's clear you've gone back to establishing where they both stand emotionally. like addressing the root of the problemo and though for me, reading about their deep thoughts on their respective other halves was painful it HAD to be done and hashed out in order for them both to reach that miraculous compromise (that we're still eagerly waiting for). But now i know that they're heading definitely toward reconcile, like i can practically imagine them renewing their vows...

    Cheers to Naruto who amply said that he didn't want to give up on them just yet! Like thank gods!! You will make a great seme out of him yet! And sympathies to Sasuke who has still to prove his integrity to Naruto the last hurdle in my opinion.

    and omfg shit just hit the fan ItaHin never saw that coming
    ps loved the little tidbits of Sasuke having his Naruto dreams and when he sinks back into being possessive and adoring Naruto in the work place

    Keep up the good work, as you've figured out by now i shall be shamelessly stalking your story!!
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  • From ANON - Chai on April 23, 2014
    OMG all these feels!! It's too much!! You rock, please pretty please update soon!!
    i'm going loco thinking about poor Sasuke and Naruto's love life.
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  • From ANON - mysticaldragon11 on April 23, 2014
    OMG! I have to see more of this! I love LOVE this story! I feel so bad for them and want them to reconcile so much! Please update soon!
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