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Reviews for Feeding Frenzy

By : EvilFuzzy
  • From ANON - Zweig on December 17, 2013
    Yo,

    I like your story so far. It is quite different to other Storys which makes it even more interesting.

    For the Harem of Naruto please use:

    Sasuke
    Haku
    Shikamaru
    Ino
    Hinata
    Neji
    Hanabi
    Anko
    Tayuya
    Kimimaro
    Itachi
    Gaara
    Temari
    Renten
    Fuu
    Yugito
    Samui
    Karui
    Konohamaru
    Yakumo
    Juugo
    Suigetsu
    Karin
    Deidara
    Nagato
    Konan

    Please use my suggestions and update soon.
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  • From ANON - kevin on December 15, 2013
    Another good chapter however from the way it was ended it appears Naruto is about to get his first male slave. Also I would like to suggest that you may need to add some older woman to the mix and I would like to suggest Hana, Tsume or Anko.
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  • From ANON - kevin on December 14, 2013
    I like the idea behind this story but would iy not be better if he also claimed some older woman.




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  • From ANON - Naruto Phantom on December 11, 2013
    I love this story so far, please say that Ino, Hinata and Tenten will soon join Sakura as Narutos love slaves?
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  • From NightEye on December 11, 2013
    Okay, as much as I like the idea for this story, I just have one major gripe. When you get to the sex scenes and such, I just can't bring myself to be interested. the scene is too quick, too little detailed, and just overall boring. Work on that a bit, and you'll be fine. I mean, this is vore and tentacles! IMAGINATION, man! Details and imagination are what hook the reader, especially for scenes like that!
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