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By : t69
  • From ANON - Hilarity on December 24, 2013
    Idk, Sakura using Hiraishin, Kiba "almost" being able to catch up to Naruto and Sasuke with those two being referred to as the strongest...if you're next fic (Naru/Hina) as you say doesn't depict a godly-Naruto that isn't canon-retarded and easily allows situations to occur where Hinata is fucked b other guys, or he loses a fight (even one) for a ridiculous simple reason, or despite his status as "strongest" or "one of top nin" he still gets bashed on by his friends......I think I'll quit fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - donalgraeme on December 15, 2013
    Aw, sweetness! Still steamy, of course, but that was fluffy. Even manipulative bitches deserve love. Can't wait for the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - Owa on December 14, 2013
    I'm wondering if you could do a Naruto/Hinata fic or Naruto/Temari?
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  • From theflamingdictator on December 07, 2013
    Very sexy and touching at the same time. I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From theflamingdictator on December 05, 2013
    Kiba acts like a complete douche... he get's all the 'free love' he wants, without any form of jealousy from Sakura. But when Sakura finally caves in and get's it on with Kai, Kiba takes the most ravaging form of revenge on Kai.

    I really hope the story will deal with this form of 'inequality' per your usual style of sexiness. Have Sakura forcing Kiba to watch as she services Kai (alone or in conjunction with the remaining kings for extra payback/voyeurism points). I can already picture it in my head. Edgy and smexy at the same time!

    Regardless of how you intend to proceed. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - kit on November 15, 2013
    sakura finally admitted to herself that she likes kai too! how exciting
    I wonder what kyoko has planned?
    feels like the tension is slowly building and something big (well, bigger than sano or the old lady spy dying) is gonna happen!
    looking forward to the next few chapters

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  • From ANON - kit on November 13, 2013
    well, looks like sano is gonna die.
    I'm really curious to see who this assassin is?? Doesn't seem to be Kai. It really could be anyone....its starting to get really exciting!
    can't wait to read what will happen next
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  • From ANON - kit on October 14, 2013
    ugh! a tease, a snippet!
    well, i look forward to reading the rest. Kai's background story was pretty tragic, if it was true.

    Don't be distressed about bumping your story. people make mistakes, and we all learn from them

    looking forward to the rest of the chapter!
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  • From Anon on October 13, 2013
    I didn't mean to make it sound like it was really really annoying or anything, I just sometimes miss other stories that get updated when you bump everything.

    They're really good, and if someone goes to the first chapter and there's a link to the other stories then you don't have to keep bumping the finished ones.
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  • From Anon on October 13, 2013
    This is a good story but it's annoying how you bring your other finished stories up to the top.
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  • From ANON - Mihkail on October 12, 2013
    I admit, I haven't read too much of your story yet. I'm a little pressed for time, and was just bouncing around different sites until I found this. I just wanted to stop and say that I am very impressed [and envious] of the amount of details you put into your smut. It entices me to improve my own work...although that won't happen for a while, thanks to school. But that brings me to my second point...post-inflammatory hyperpigmentation, apex of her thighs, anterior fornix...it sounds like someone is in the medical field, mm? ;)

    [Sorry if this was entered more than once. It kept giving me a blank page whenever I tried to submit.]
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  • From ANON - kit on October 07, 2013
    hm....is kai a ninja as well? I'm curious about how he got into her office when she apparently has some sort of security precaution. eh, either way....I like him, right now. haha It was nice getting to know all the kings because they seemed like nice enough guys. I was expecting them to be snobby, but they were pretty down to earth....and slightly perverted.
    The tension between sakura and kiba is interesting. I wonder how their relationship is going to survive through that? I wonder if they'll succeed in their mission. They are having a difficult time keeping in character, especially Sakura. Its hard to hide ones intelligence. I'm really enjoying your story. Especially, how you are portraying Sakura and Kiba with faults. yes, they are great ninja but they are not perfect. makes it seem that much more realistic!
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  • From ANON - kit on October 04, 2013
    completely enthralled with your story! cant wait to read how it will progress. While I do like reading how Kiba and sakura's relationship is going, I also like hearing about the relationship of other characters like shino and Ino. Will we be getting a glimpse of anything interesting at sasuke's party or will the next few chapters be mainly focused on the mission?
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  • From ANON - TopazDragon on October 02, 2013
    Damn, looks like Ino might be having her own adventures with Shino while Kiba and Sakura deal with their mission. Dunno if you plan another side fic to that, but as I said, I love that couple and the characters of Ino and Shino not to imagine the what-they-are-doing.

    However, base on the mission, this will be interesting. But I find this already fun. For one, the men are being sent on seduction missions. Well, Kiba is, at any rate.

    Usually you read a fic and it is the girl, but I'm sure the men have had to do it once or twice their own self. And already the emotional, suspicious feelings of a budding relationship begin to play. Sakura doesn't have the experience of Ino, as we can deduct from previous comments, so she isn't as confident in this new role of girlfriend. Not that she hasn't been one, but this is different.

    Ino seemed to be able to realize her love for Shino quickly because she already knew it was different from the other men. Sakura doesn't have that experience and it'll take her time, though Ino already seems to know.

    Awe, poor Sakura. I admit, she isn't my favorite character, but you make her likable and when she tried to talk to him and apologize he sorta blew her off. Though, not meanly. I wonder if putting off such a conversation is wise and if it will even come up before or during the mission at all.

    I might have to officially join this site in order to make sure of the updates that are coming out and whatever other works you might end up writing. It would be worth it.

    Thank you for writing this! Can't wait to see more!
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