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Reviews for The wonder years

By : kzdatgurl
  • From ANON - mysticaldragon11 on April 03, 2014
    So in love with this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - DaydreamerNitewalker on November 04, 2013
    Ohhhhh puuuhhh-leeezzzze UPDAAATTE! This is a really great fic. Usually highschool fics are all bubblegum romances with a fairytale twist, and sappy ending. I like how you stress the struggles of some teen's lives. Not all of us have had a happy childhood. For me it was being diagnosed with bipolar disorder, schizophrenia, agoraphobia, aphenphosmphobia and monophobia. I watched my father beat the shit out of my mother, and older sister for years until my mom finally grew a pair, stood up to him and left. I was made fun of ever since preschool to the tenth grade, where I decided to drop out, and just get my fucking GED. During my junior high, and highschool years I was known as the badass of every school I went to simply because of the fact I never lost a fight ( even against guys ) and people grew to fear me, even my teachers. I was abused by a guy I knew and once loved at the age of fourteen, and I decided enough was enough, and I wasn't gonna play the weak damsel in distress anymore so at the age of sixteen, I kicked his ass, and nearly killed the bastard in the process. I am now 21, and there are so many other things I've been through. Things I am ashamed of. My teen years and highschool years were the rock-bottom of my entire existence. Though I find it amazing how you portrayed the agony of both Sasuke and Naruto's life as teenagers. And both boys feel like the other has it better. Naruto believes it must've been nice growing up rich, but he is ignorant to the knowledge of how differently Sasuke's father treated him compared to his seemingly perfect brother, and the tragedy that befell his family plus the torture he endures in the present, while Sasuke is so deep in self-pity he doesn't notice the fact that he is not the only one who has had life screwing him raw in the ass from day one either. Naruto experienced abuse as a lonely, misunderstood child kinda like in the Naruto manga/anime series. Nobody had patience with him, and most made his life a living hell. It was just like his childhood in the manga/anime. I love how you kept to that, and I honestly felt every emotion each boy felt. Including Naruto's confusion about his sexuality. I went through the same thing, and it took me years to finally accept that I'm bisexual. If you don't have the support of someone who is open to the idea of homosexuality like Jiraiya it makes it harder to accept yourself and come out of the closet. Naruto had it easy. I had no one to help me with this issue growing up. I had to sort it out by myself. And still I literally burst out of the closet waving my rainbow flag proudly in the air, and not backing down from my beliefs that love knows no race, color or GENDER. Love is love. If you love someone and they return your feelings, then WTF is the problem? Homophobic freaks. I swear to Kami though, if you don't finish this amazing piece of art, I am gonna hunt you down, and kill you dangerously slow in the most painful way possible...ok, ok just kidding. But this is a great fanfic, and WHENEVER you get the time update until the story is complete. I beg of you to finish this fic for my sanity, as well as others who were left completely flabbergasted and angered by the dreaded cliff-hanger. Again. Please finish. Thank you.
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on August 30, 2013
    Good story so far, please continue. Please make Sasuke grow some balls and fight for Naruto in later chapters. I don't like him being so weak.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2013
    I believe I remember reading this on ff.net. Nice to see you're uploading it here as well.

    From what I remember of this fic, it was a guilty pleasure for me. Lots of soap opera-style twists and turns. :D

    One thing that sorta bugs me about your writing though is all the tags (flashback/end flashback, later that night, etc.) Stuff like that is very distracting in a story. There was a good discussion on the use of tags in fiction here on the messageboards that could really help you if you check it out:

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/25862-flashbacks-in-fiction/

    Good luck with your story. :)
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