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Reviews for A Kunoichi's Needs

By : SlaveNaruko
  • From Lawrence-Helmbain on May 06, 2019

    I'm guessing that Naruto will either never find out about this or will be horribly humiliated by them once he finds out... hughhh....

    I always find it funny when I read these stories that Naruto is always inferior when it comes to his privates in comparison to the one cucking him... 

    It makes me feel better about the story because it indicates the author feels he has to in some way nerf Naruto for the story to work... 

    I wonder if I'll ever come across a story where he finds out what's been going on and gets pay back... 

    I'm not saying that Naruto should go in there and kill them or even touch them... he's the Prankster King from Hell he can figure something out... hell just thinking about this I got a few ideas...


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  • From ANON - on January 10, 2017

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  • From daianapotter on April 29, 2016
    really good chapter!!! wonder if naruto will find it... well he had sakura now so he cant say too much
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2014
    it is hot!!! i apreciate he cum inside her!!
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  • From ANON - yui on December 03, 2014
    please write more. this is amazing
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  • From 123rodx on July 03, 2014
    Love this story , it's awesome to see Hinata slowly fade into her lusty pleasure. If you ever gonna continue this story, would you make Naruto doing similar activities with Sakura cuz she look like the one that get in attention.

    Overall great story XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2014
    Honestly wouldn't be surprised if Naruto was pounding Sakura instead. Seeing as he only shows interest in her, added to the fact that they're both not even from the same dimension so there was technically never a Naru/Hina pairing.
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  • From ANON - dest on November 14, 2013
    Really hoping you continue this story. Loved the first 2 chapters, could be amazing with more.
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  • From ANON - dest on October 02, 2013
    Hope to see this updated. Amazing start.
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  • From ANON - james on July 19, 2013
    naruto getting his male friends(kiba/sasuke/and konohamaru) so angry that they decide to seduce his daughter and gangbang her.No idea what you's name her but naruto seems unoriginal enough to name her naruko/kushina/minako(minato but girly get it?) Have her be Shions daugter so she would hire them for a mission i guess?
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  • From ANON - james on July 19, 2013

    plz write more
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  • From ANON - todd1928 on July 12, 2013
    All your work is great but i especially love this fic, please keep it up
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  • From ANON - sissi on July 09, 2013
    As some reviewers pointed, it really looks like the relationship between Hinata and Naruto is seriously lacking both physically and emotionally and that something may be going on between Naruto and Sakura. It's a reason goond enough to not feel bad about the cheating in that particular settling. Also it may give room for some plot.

    I really hope you continue, because you have some of the hottest sex scenes ever.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2013
    Just as hot as the last time!

    So Hinata and Naruto don't have sex that often. That's certainly a reason why she'd get seduced so easily. I think if you're going to keep writing this past the third chapter, you should start building in some plot because you can only go so far with a cheating fic before readers start wondering why they're cheating or if they're going to get caught or whatever. If SasuHina were in a normal relationship, you could do a million PWP chapters with them having sex, but cheating automatically creates a conflict in the story that needs to be resolved.

    I, personally, like the idea that NaruHina isn't working for Naruto and Hinata both inside of the bedroom and outside of it. Maybe that's why Naruto isn't that good in bed and doesn't want to have sex with her that often because they don't click in some way. I think this would help Sasuke's characterization, especially if he's realized that NaruHina isn't that strong of a pairing, because so far, he looks like an asshole who can only think with his dick since he hasn't spared a thought for Naruto. Naruto is supposed to be his best friend, right? He's messing up the guy code here (bros before hos). But if he's been smart enough to realize Naruto isn't that into Hinata, it gives him an excuse not to feel all that bad about his actions.

    Not suggesting you turn this into some big character-based romance fic, but a little more with the characters would make reading a long smutty fic even more enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - The One Reviewer who is not Butt-hurt on July 07, 2013
    Ha! I am loving the outrage by other reviewers at this fic. I am hoping the author ignores all the butthurt going on here and continues this gold mine of a story.

    It might be NTR and adultery but this really is a smoking hot lemon story in disguise. You have a girl who is pretty neglected by one of the dumbest protagonists of all time, is seduced thoroughly by said dumbass's best friend, resulting in copious hot steaming sex. There is no rape, no abuse, no emotional distress. This is good old-fashioned consensual lust/affection between two people.

    I would not be surprised if Mr. Dumbass's neglect of poor Hinata is due to comprehensive "physical checkups" with the resident medic. That would be an excellent side-story to this work.

    The writing is good if a bit flawed, some phrases are awkwardly worded. The plot however is excellent and realistic. I am looking forward to a long story with plenty of "scenarios" between the two lovers before they get caught (if they do).


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