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Reviews for Denied Fate

By : Daydreamer79
  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2013
    sasuke was 108 years old and just into puberty- approximately the age of a 17 year old human when he first sexed up kiba- but you wrote that kiba was only 20 years old and not even mature enough for his facial markings_ so how was such an immature wolf able to 'link his soul' to sasuke. why would he do it without even telling sasuke. this is some fucked up shit.
    why would sasuke link his soul to kiba without even telling kiba about it first.
    why would other were/vamps want to bond if they can't make children_ it goes against their biological imperative.
    sasuke and kiba should have been killed- sasuke turned to ash by the sun and kiba skinned alive and then slashed/hacked to death by his pack.
    sasuke was warned b4 he even met kiba- though itachi encouraged him to have sex with a wolf- stupid fuck that he is. but he was warned that mating one would be death- and then you go and do away with the death penalty---why even mention it in the first place then-----i would have enjoyed the story more if they were executed.....they weren't even banished from their packs/family/home land......they break all the rules and their only punishment is that they can't serve on the council---weak. and shouldn't the hyuuga's be able to demand satisfaction- if they want kiba to be executed for dishonoring hinata; it should be so...kiba knew he was contracted to mate with hinate, yet he still mated and soul bonded with a male vamp_____the punishment wasn't nearly severe enough- which kinda made all the earlier drama and warnings and taboo, totally meaningless.

    was it horrible?? no i obviously didn't agree with some points, but it was still an interesting story
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  • From smint45 on June 09, 2013
    So I decided I can't wait for the next chappy of the sequal so I read this instaed^^And I'm surprised how well you made the pairing work!!!! I'm normally no fan of this pairing but I can say that this story was totally hot^^ I really adored it!!!! And this proves again that I just love your wirting no matter what pairing you write about^^ Hope to see you agian soon preferably with the sequal^^^
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 01, 2013
    I loved it!!! This cements you as one of my top favorite Yaoi authors.
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