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Reviews for Liberated

By : Nesha
  • From ANON - Mel on January 23, 2014
    Hi Nesha it has been about a year since my last review, and I have been checking back routinely to see if this story has been updated. If it isn't to much trouble could you let me know if this story has been abandoned, just a line or two would be very much appreciated.

    Please drop me a mail: d-ion@hotmail.co.uk

    Regards

    Mel
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 26, 2013
    Very interesting story, Ino's story was quiet shocking although so far I have not seen any redeeming qualities in her. Simply saying she feels horrible does not exactly absolve here in my eyes.

    It is a very intriguing story I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - dx on January 01, 2013
    Love the story so far, but it has been a while since you uploaded the last chapter. I've been checking routinely, hope you haven't given up on it.
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  • From scriptease on October 18, 2012
    Hey Nesha, I really enjoyed your writing style! Not the typical Naruto setting and all, but the beginning had me interested, and the humour made me want to read on. Have to say there was a fair bit of dialogue there that i felt slowed the story down and at times it seemed like you were trying a little too hard to fit as many characters as you could into the scene. Then it got interesting again towards the end with Ino's vague attitude and rushing off. Will be interesting to see where it all goes.

    As for the logic behind KibaIno, I say do what you want to do, and if you can make it work all the power to you. The only logic that matters is what you write in your world! Besides, none of this is canon and the characters are so loosely based on their anime counterparts anyway, right?

    Keep up the good work~ :)
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