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Reviews for naruto domination

By : johnljohnsibn
  • From Teeraal on October 26, 2012
    intresting. if you update please break your paragraphs so they are a bit smaller it makes them easier to read. a good ammount is usually 5-8 lines tops and maybe occasionally up to 15 lines. you can do more but it makes it hard to read and that makes some people(like me) not want to really read it.
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  • From Takai153 on September 08, 2012
    Interesting idea, I look forward to seeing how this goes. Your paragraphing is off though and future chapters should be longer.
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