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Reviews for Betrayal

By : KeiichiDaigo
  • From Nescafevh on October 03, 2012
    I like it the way you did it! Keep it this way and submit it again slightly different with alternate chapters! Like call this one Betrayal, the do another version called Betrayal And Lies or something. I like this one and if you keep it this way I'll continue to read it! I don't care if they're more OC than that! The only one who can write a fiction like the real Itachi and Kisame would be the original writer, otherwise ALL fan fictions are OC! Even MINE are and I'm not afraid to admit it!!! Good luck!!!
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  • From kyoko8yeo on October 02, 2012
    Hehehe... been waiting for the update all day long, and it is worth a diamond to wait for it! I love it when Pip handled Sakura! Oh well, I don't mind the pairing just as long as Naruto is the uke. (*^-^*)V
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  • From ANON - Jorge on September 30, 2012
    please bring back the story
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on September 18, 2012
    If you still need a beta hit up my email in the review or just post up a chapter and i will put my email up for you.
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  • From ANON - Me on September 18, 2012
    Nice story. As for pairing, as long as Naruto is seme I'll be good.
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  • From ANON - Kinkou on September 18, 2012
    Awwwww... I hope you are feeling better now that the surgery is over. Take your time and get to living wholly once more; we can wait longer. If beta is needed, may I offer my aid? If one has already been found, good luck to you both. ^_^. Be safe and well.
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  • From ANON - LordGeovanni on September 13, 2012
    Hey, I vote Naruto/Shikamaru, then Shikamaru/Naruto, then Shikamaru/Kyuubi/Naruto. (if you will allow multiple agreements.) I really don't like Kisame/Naruto or Itachi/Naruto so I down vote that if possible.
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  • From kyoko8yeo on September 12, 2012
    HMPH! Serve them right! Well I think based on this chapter that means Tsunade and Jiraiya aren't bad, but I guess Naruto already felt betrayed so it's gonna hard to forgive them. Oh I still want Ita/Naru.
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  • From ANON - Kinkou on September 11, 2012
    Nice...very nice. I really love the back story on the three imbecile's actions. Can't wait to see what next; I understand about the waiting tho on the longer chapters. *sighs* maybe I can use the time to finish typing up the next chapter of my story....hmmmmm....have a great day and I will be waiting with breathe held.
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  • From DepressedPoet on September 10, 2012
    Shika/Naru
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  • From frix on September 10, 2012
    why do you say that Kisame and Itachi are winning if Shikamaru has an equal number of votes?

    Why is "shika/naruto" counted differently from "naruto/shika"? They obviously are the same pairing so they should be counted the same and their votes should be added together to make another 5. The way you count things is just weird
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  • From Luna-Isis on September 10, 2012
    Nice chapter!
    I vote Itachi/Naruto
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  • From ANON - Ryan on September 09, 2012
    My vote is for Kisame/Naruto/Itachi.
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  • From ANON - librarycat9 on September 08, 2012
    ShikaXKyuuXNaru
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  • From ANON - Kyoko21 on September 07, 2012
    Wow, can't wait 4 the next chapter. I like ItaNaru. So I guess I vote for that.
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