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Reviews for A Deal Made

By : VFSNAKE
  • From Kdragonfire on January 29, 2018

    I really wish that Hinata had film Sakura as she fucked. I can totally see Hinata showing the film to Sakura then telling her that she will show the film to Sausake. Unless Sakura agrees to sign a contract. That would make Sakura completely submissive to Naruto and Hinata.That Sakura's duties Clean the house,seeing to the guests keeping them pleasured. Being Naruto's sex servant/concubine.Can you see Sakura bending over and Naruto comes home and decides to help her clean the floor. Naruto flips up her skirt and enter her pussy or ass.This cause Sakura to move forwand and moves her ass or pussy to the top of his cock until Naruto thrusht into Sakura again.


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  • From ANON - Drake on July 11, 2013
    great story, loved the vibrator part--that stuff always turns me on.

    anyway, this has to be one of the better fics like this, as it actually portrays the characters as cannon, at least in plausibility, and how you were true to their traits. to tell you the truth, this is what i always imagined naruto being like ones he gained enough skill/confidence in said skill, as hes had that personality since he was a kid...unlike how the manga goes about it, as if hes just brain dead or something...his personality was replaced by the sun, or even a smiley face with the ability to show angst, idk.

    -i went off track...well, i like your non-risque stories on ff, but damn are you good at these stories, if this fic is a good example! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - firelordeg on May 29, 2013
    thank you for sharing this fantastic story
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  • From Darkling on August 02, 2012
    Well, some OOC-ness aside (which, in truth, I don't see ac very important because, only Kishimoto himself could claim to write Naruto & co 100% accurate anyway, and fanfics _thrive_ on OOC-ness :D ), as a blackmail-fic as well as a corruption-fic (if that's the right word here - from struck-up bitch/Uchiha-fangirl to Naruto-addicted slut sure seems close enough anyway XD ), it's truly excellent! :D.

    Wouldn't have minded a bit of a bit more of an epilouge though - maybe a timeskip ahead some years in the future, from Sakura's POV, shoving her pregnant (late stage) and taking care of Naruto & Hinata's little kid (fulfiling her duty as the "nanny" of the family), all while being happier than she can even remember being ever before and having completely forgotten about Sasuke... Or something like that, anyway. Either way, good work! :D
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  • From lobo_sangriento on August 02, 2012
    Sakura got herself a better deal here,the best part had to be how slowly she submitted to Naruto for a great gangbang ending
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  • From ANON - codywelch17 on August 02, 2012
    beautiful as always vfsnake.
    big big fan by the way.
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