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Reviews for Lambs To The Slaughter

By : KishinoKurobi
  • From ANON - Lector 82 on October 17, 2015
    En éste sitio-web e podido leer historias realmente interesantes, pero la tuya no entra en ésa categoría, tu historia es mediocre, sin una trama desente, la esena lemon es tan erótica como ver a un martillo golpear un clavo,tu patético Fanfiction es tan aburrido que me dio sueño de solo leer la mitad,por favor no ocupes el espacio que escritores de verdad podrían ocupar.
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  • From ANON - NotAFlamer on August 29, 2015
    Its Fucking Shit Kyuubi Go Fuck Yourself Love The Lemon Vut Hate Kyuubi Raping Kami Cmon Theres No Way Kyuubi Is Stronger Than Her Thats Just Bullshit And Wheres Naruto He Should Be Hating Kyuubi And Try To Get Stronger To Kill That Fool
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  • From ANON - Unknown on October 27, 2014
    ...... Shit. Just missing scat, urine, and unbirth. Then you'll have all of your most fucked up fetishes piled into one giant convoluted, unexplained, nonsensical, grotesque stories ive yet to read. Shit. Latex lugia wasn't this fucking bad.
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  • From ANON - Wulf on May 17, 2014
    I honestly don't know if I should be amused with how terrible this is -not the grammar/spelling just the characterization and the plot, or lack-here-of, or if I should be disgusted with it. Either way, this is most asuredly NOT a fic that I will continue reading.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2013
    They're like the dragons in unmodded Skyrim. All legendary in talk and tales, but then weak as crap. Jinchuriki should be weapons of mass destruction, Biju literal walking disasters and storyline not dog shit on a page.
    Two things first off Humanity in the naruto verse was the creation of the Juubi a being with 5 times the chakra total, not even including the bonus gained from synergy, and chakra 68,719,476,736 times more dense than Kyuubi's. HUmanity a race that gets stronger with each generation. By the time the Biju were getting sealed it had been several thousand generations. There power had increased greatly byth at point. Still nothing even compared to Ichibi but they were able to fight. Another gift they had over the biju was technique. The ability to focus and alter their power. As Minato has shownin canon why matchth e Kyuubi's power if you can reflect back at him faster than he can charge up again? If you evre play the original FFIV the only way to beat Bahamut is to cast reflect on your characters. Otherwise, one move game over. Same principle. The bijuw ere also originally sealed by Hashirama who was the strongest descendent of their 'father' who was able to defeat the Jubi...in general the Biju are forces of nature but just like in reality nature can be overcome and conquered with the right tools and knowledge.
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  • From ANON - jamie on September 03, 2012
    yeah way to ott, having kami as kyubi's bitch just made this rubish. i can understand wanting the biju to be more powerful but seriously way to ott. i stopped reading after the 3rd chapter because i no longer cared about the story after it.
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  • From ANON - Nowhere Man on August 06, 2012
    Well this is one of the worst pieces of garbage that I've read on this site at least what I could read of it. Everyone and everything is so out of character I don't see why you even bothered you should have just made your own universe because then maybe at least this story might make a bit of sense as it doesn't make any sense at all. The fox itself is so completely made up you'd be better off just making up some kind of demon for the story but since it has some kind of strange multiple personality where it's one thing at one moment and completely different the next I'll just put it down to bad writing.

    Some things in this are so stupid it literally made me angry reading this crap. Why in the hell wouldn't Naruto want to kill something that murdered his father and then tortured, raped and murdered his mother? Why the hell would it even keep it's word, it's a fucking demon the enjoyed murder and rape there is no reason why the hell it would keep its word about anything but yet you try and make it have some kind of thing where it would keep it...how does that many any sense!? Plus you should have at least warned people this would be one of those fucking snuff stories, how the hell you people get off on that crap I'll never know.

    And it actually says he won't turn Naruto against the village...bullshit! Again it's a fucking demon why the hell wouldn't it? Hell I don't understand why it even spared Naruto and didn't just kill him since as you written him he would just torture Naruto daily for 7 years and then kill him after the deal just to be a dick like he is. and no one helps or even attempts to fight back, again that's just crap the whole village is nothing but a bunch of limp dicks that do nothing? Anime is filled with people going up against god like characters with no chance of winning.

    There is no way to kill him either? That's total bullshit, what's the point to anything that happens in this story? There doesn't seem to be one and it just seems to be filled with nothing but bullshit and a giant middle finger to the Naruto fan base. I honestly have not been so turned off and pissed off at a story in so long and it's a stupid story I have no idea why I'm so pissed off at it. Normally crap stories like this I just ignore but for some reason I just can't. This is basically my way of just exercising these feelings out of me so I can fucking move on. I don't care if you delete this after, hell I expect you to, but I got to get this out of me before it drives me nuts. Personally I hope this story is never finished as you'll just get bored and give up since no one seems to enjoy reading this thing. The only reason I bet you haven't gotten more negative reviews is because on this site your account can be deleted without warning from the higher ups if a complaint is filed. Which is why I didn't make an account for this site.

    I don't care if you got a response to this honestly there is no justification for ANYTHING in this sad excuse of a story. The only other story that was this stupid was Dark Marvel X-Men or something like that which that guy gave up on.
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  • From Christopher11 on August 06, 2012
    Sorry, but I have to disagree. As powerful as any ONE person is, there is always someone else who has the potential to become more powerful than them or can band MANY together to take that person down.

    That includes gods, who are more well-referred to as 'god-like entities'. Most of them are so arrogant that they cannot even conceive of someone challenging them and therefore tend to overlook things.
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  • From ANON - Dante on August 03, 2012
    Is this going to be a naruto centerd fic cuz if it is i beleive naruto needs to find a way to kill the kyubi and take its power for his own. So far im not a fan of this fic cuz for 1 you killed off Kushina and second you made the lemons sick in my opinion (even if it was a rape scene).
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  • From ANON - Chaoslegionz on August 02, 2012
    so what will happen to naruto? will he be a badass motherfucker like kyubbi or will he be stupid like cannon or in between???
    and all of those tags are from kyubbi doing to others or naruto to others?

    well beside that the chapter was aahhh... Intersting, original and a little disturbing but cool.
    cant help to dislike that the bijus will be so godlike i mean i know in cannon they are pathetic but come on atleast give them some weakness and let naruto know them.

    anyway update soon
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