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Reviews for Children of Sin

By : AmberDDawn
  • From ANON - flaming rose on November 15, 2012
    Noooooooo!!!! Please, please (Stresses the pleaseeeee.)let Sasuke and Naruto -over time and dis trust and hardships, of course!- make up, please! Pleaasssseeeee! Pleeaaasssseeeee! Pweassseee? Pwwwweeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee? Pwwwwwwweeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?!?! (Does puppy eye no jutsu.) Pweeeeaaaaaaassssseeeeeeee?
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  • From ANON - G on June 12, 2012
    Erm, well... it was nice that there was at least one legitimately heroic character in the story (Karin). So I'm glad that Karin, Suigetsu, and Juugo got a good ending since they were the best people in the fic. Ino and Sai weren't so bad, either, so it's nice they ended up together. Team 7, on the other hand, was a total mess. I had sympathy for Sakura, but then she practically killed Naruto, so I hated her in the end. There was no hope for Sasuke, whatsoever. He was crazy throughout the fic, but raping and mind controlling Naruto just put it on a whole other level. I didn't mind his craziness until he did that. And Naruto was so useless. His main role in the fic was just to be a victim and not much else. I don't know if I liked this fic. I guess I probably didn't. If it wasn't for Karin and the rest of Team Hebi trying to do the right thing at the end of the fic, it would have been totally depressing since everybody else seemed to be doing the exact wrong thing and only thinking of themselves.

    If you do a continuation, will it be of Naruto's revenge against Sasuke? Making Naruto go a bit crazy himself (he kinda has to after everything he's been through) and hurting Sasuke back is the only ending possible for Naruto that I can see, besides him never escaping from Sasuke. Because even if Naruto manages to get free, he can't exactly go back to Sakura, or back to Konoha like nothing happened.
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