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Reviews for The Sun and Moon

By : MisatosPenPen
  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2015
    What is the name of the sequel
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  • From ANON - ForeverWildfire2.0 on July 31, 2014
    What is the name of the sequel and is it up yet?
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  • From whitetiger on July 15, 2014
    I loved this story! I know it's only been a few months since you last updated but I can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From Reithra21 on March 18, 2014
    When is the sequel coming out I can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From RiswynnWarrior on December 24, 2013
    Hahahah yes!!! I love this story! Sasuke's anger makes me crack up every time! Please finish this story, I'm in love with it(:
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  • From 1CarinoInu on December 22, 2013
    OMG, LOL! That ending was hilarious! Poor Kakashi, though. Sasuke can be awfully brutal to his lover. Meanwhile, Itachi has such a dirty mouth... quite wonderful. I can imagine the usually stoic and closed-off Uchiha being that way - screaming for his lover to do all sorts of sordid things to him.
    Whew! Did it just get warm in here?
    A wonderful update.
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  • From ANON - noriko hana on August 03, 2013
    wow..... update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2013
    First things first, thank you for the new chapter. It's much appreciated.

    Now, while I know Sasuke is a self centered bastard, I'm annoyed by how he treats Naruto. Naruto has had a worse life than him from the get go, caused by Sasuke's family member to boot, but he expects Naruto to take his s**t and be there for him and his brother. Now this is not to say that Naruto shouldn't try to take care of his loved ones, but who's taking care of him to the same degree (as either his lover or best friend)? What happens if Naruto has a breakdown? Will he just kick him while he's down? Naruto it's only human. Everyone has a breaking point. Sasuke needs a reality check and hopefully something will backfire to provide it.

    Another thing... poor Naruto really gets the short end of the stick. Sasuke was lucky to have his first (and many other) times with his lover without grief. Naruto gets constantly harassed by Sasuke and can't even enjoy losing his virginity (submissively) without nearly being attacked (more than once). Since Itachi has his doubts and past hanging over his head (both the massacre and his former lover), he's not truly taking care of his current lover as he should. I hope someone will step in to support Naruto. Poor guy has never had any sense of a normal life or the opportunity to watch his parents to see what a relationship should be like.

    Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From 1CarinoInu on July 14, 2013
    Very sweet interaction between brothers. I love the Sasuke/Kakashi relationship, but I'm having trouble with Itachi/Naruto. It just doesn't seem to fit. However, because of the fact it doesn't fit works for this. One is dark and serious while the other is bright and fun loving. It's the old 'opposites attract' thing and I can see how Itachi would be attracted to the light of Naruto.
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  • From Jan on June 04, 2012
    That was so sweet and hot!

    Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^
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  • From Jan on May 27, 2012
    Hope Naruto comes and talks to Itachi soon, please update chapter 3 soon ^_^

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  • From ANON - Kuro Mitsu on May 04, 2012
    This story is awesome! You put so much detail and depth in each chapter, great descriptions of each scene, and I love the pairings. I'm happy to see Kakashi and Sasuke together and am waiting anxiously for Itachi and Naruto to finally get together. Both chapters are excellent, I'm looking forward to your next update.:)
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  • From Stacy on April 12, 2012
    I so can't wait for Itachi and Naruto's story! Kakashi is such a sweety with Sasuke. I really can't wait for more!!
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