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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    Lol, the Shika rescue had me laughing. At first I was like oh no they are 2 women against 6 men, Shika is going to be stolen. Then I was like 2 women that can kick ass. Anywho totally enjoying myself
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    I have no idea why I love chants so much, In the cold of space you find the heat of suns. MAN that just has my mind exploding like an empathy in extreme pleasure. And now it begins, who else knows Madara's secret if only one and not the ONLY person who knew is dead? I don't know what my siblings would have to do to make me want to murder them. Of course we aren't identical twins heirs to an empire but still I just don't see it happening.

    ja would say more but gotta go to class
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    GAH!!! you make me wish I lived in their world and watched Naruto and Sasuke on the big screens, carrying a 2 sided coin with their faces. And just hoping that they found me worthy enough to scoop me off the street and let me be apart of their inner circle. I just have a big fat HA to say to Orochimaru, thought he could use Sasuke's weakness did he? I wonder if there are more orochis and kabus out there that haven't been found and where Kabuto hid the stem cells. I get lulled into a sense of security then it all goes up in flames, I feel like the climax is approaching too fast

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    even though it's already been proven I feel like Sumiko should be a typed genius, but if she was she would make Ha-chan and Shi-chan's lives a living hell. LOL anywho I am going to bed for real this time

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    I think this will be my last, gotta get to sleep. But when Ran calls Haru by his full name I get a tingly sensation. lol
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 18, 2013
    I feel so bad for Pein, so so bad. Konan is a strong lady I wonder what she will chose once the Atkatsuki is eliminated
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 17, 2013
    Sweet Jesus, any mention of Naruto dying has me in tears Ch 56 review. Especially when it comes from Naruto himself. When he said he wouldn't be there to see Haru get his inheritance I had an idea of them putting him in stasis and waking him up to see his children grown. But I don't know if he would like that or rather be dead. It could be like 50 first dates, where he just pops in a movie and watches all the important happenings that went on

    ja
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on November 17, 2013
    Hello again Ms. Mannah,

    I know the story/saga has come to an end and it makes me sad that I wasn't along for the ride this time like all the others T_T. But I'm very surprised by my will power for staying away so long. Anywho I know I have read Ch 55 already but I have no idea where I left off so a little reread is no big deal. If nobody has said it recently I LOVE YOU AND YOUR GORGEOUS BRAIN!!!! You are truly amazing and I wish I could come up with ideas half as great. I was gifted with many talents but writing was not one of them. So for the next couple of days you will be getting reviews from me once I get to a place I have never been before. GAH I just want to go away and act like you are still writing every sat.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the gorgeous brain overflow
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on October 15, 2013
    Wow! What an ending! It was good to see it from so many points of view. The sort of chapter that makes you feel all fuzzy inside :)
    I'm so glad Sasuke survived- trust Rin to win the impossible cases! Tsu-chan is growing up just like Naruto- noisy!
    I really like that Iruka went all 'sensei' on Sasuke. It reminded me of 'In the cold of space...'

    A really great saga, I'm going to miss your updates and your writing. Good luck for the future! i look forward to anymore stories ypu write.
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  • From ANON - Fluister on October 04, 2013
    Wow. The final chapter! It has been an amazing and long journey and I know it hasn't always been easy to keep writing. But I am very glad and grateful that you saw it through and brought it to this beautiful end. I really enjoyed reading this story and it is definitely one of my favourite fictions.

    Thank you for writing! And hopefully we'll be able to read more from you.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 02, 2013
    I miss reading you so much and it's been, what a week?!:) You know us junkies the first fews weeks are the hardest to kick:) SQ I'm sorry I couldn't write more for the ending chapter but I can't and I still can't! Why you ask? Well this silly girl just can't say good bye... I know it's dumb but I'm not ready yet. It's a wonderful ending and everything is perfect! I was thinking I'm going to start re-reading and by the time the new story is ready I'll be ready to start anew:) Please keep me on the list for update! I'm not big into social media. 'Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe' you have gave me such great pleasure in reading your works ~BOWING~ Thank you!
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  • From ANON - esquisitepet on September 28, 2013
    Thank you for a great end to this part of your stories. Best wishes to you on your original story.
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  • From ANON - Morlana on September 27, 2013
    I know I reviewed but I had other thoughts. Shika I felt weakened the last few chapters and haru became a much stronger character. I guess if you did write another story, the children would be the focus. If it happens I can hardly wait.
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  • From ANON - Morlana on September 27, 2013
    I know I reviewed but I had other thoughts. Shika I felt weakened the last few chapters and haru became a much stronger character. I guess if you did write another story, the children would be the focus. If it happens I can hardly wait.
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  • From ANON - Morlana on September 26, 2013
    Wow. It's been a while since I read. Got caught up on face book games, but I'm glad I remembered the story and got the chan e to finish reading it. You are an amazing storyteller and I appreciate you sharing with us. Reading the end makes me want to go back o he beginning so that I can revisit how this all started. I anticipate your next works. If you ever put this in paperback ill be one of the first to buy.
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