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Reviews for Toxic

By : Xiophelia
  • From moonprincess90 on March 28, 2012
    A very sweet story thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Akira on March 27, 2012
    although I like the plot of the story, i have to said that when someone is sick has Naruto, the last thought on their mind is sex because of all the meds they usualy have to take to attack the cancer.
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  • From ANON - G on March 27, 2012
    The story wasn't long enough to really make a judgement call, but even so, I felt like Naruto made the wrong decision in the end. I think since he was improving at the hospital, then that's where he needed to stay, and the brothers needed to be unselfish enough to remain as visitors for the time being until Naruto finished his treatments. The brothers admitted they had handled things wrong with Naruto, which was good, but their reasoning for asking Naruto to come home was a selfish one (because they were "a mess" without him). I'd have been more in the brothers' favor if they'd asked him to come home for more unselfish reasons (because they thought they could do a better job than the hospital in caring for Naruto at home).

    Naruto's situation reminded me of a friend of mine who went through cancer. During chemo she did the same thing as Naruto and started reevaluating the relationships in her life and cut out all the ones that caused her stress because she had no energy to spare on anything that was troubling her. She didn't run away and try to go through it alone like Naruto, she just sat a few friends down and was like "this is what I need from you right now, can you give me that?" Unfortunately because all the friends in question were selfish to begin with, they were all like, "no, I'm sorry." So now that she's done with her treatments, she doesn't hang out with those friends much anymore. The Uchihas are way kinder and more loving than the people my friend knew, but if they were stressing Naruto out to begin with, they were going to find other ways to stress him out once they got home because that's just the type of people they are to begin with. Can't change that, unfortunately! :P
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  • From ANON - MIja on March 27, 2012
    awwww that made me cry! It was so sad and so beutiful that it was hard to pin down one emotion, I was hurt for Naruto when they left him out and was all for him locking them out of the hospital then when they came for him, I dunno it was soo sweet and heart wrenching all the same, it was good, thank you for that read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From scarywoman on March 26, 2012
    i love it and feel like there should be more or a part two. honestly a tear jerker, in a good way. stupid uchiha brothers, neglecting naruto like that. just plain stupid and mean.
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