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Reviews for First Time

By : vampireunicorn
  • From ANON - G on March 05, 2012
    I was clapping for Sasuke at the end. Sai deserved that!

    Aside from that, I thought they were surprisingly in-character in this fic, despite it being a short, mostly PWP. The fact that they didn't argue much or insult each other was a very welcome surprise. I think they can still be themselves without having to do either of those (very irritating) things, so it's nice to read a fic where that's the case.
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  • From moodysavage on March 05, 2012
    lol loved how it ended :)
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  • From Mija on March 05, 2012
    Omg that was totally HOT and SMEXY!..I loved how both Naruto and Sasuke had their 1st with each other in the same night, and each one was different and so well done, the descriptions of how Naruto gets to be the only one to see Sasuke smile at him and see the tenderness and all that was really really well done, and lmaoo Sai is hilarious and totally deserved that punch in the end, and Naruto he is such a impressionable ninja, letting Sai goad and taunt him to do things he was set on NOT doing and then going further as to try to go kinky when they had just started on the anal lol, this was good thanks for sharing, huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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