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Reviews for Inheritance

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  • From Anko-Rocks on April 08, 2018

    Liking the story thusfar and it seems pretty interesting, but you honestly didn't need to add a new clan for Naruto to be on of the last of. He's already one of the last Uzumaki's. If they truly cared about clans they would tapped on that and used CRA for that first. I mean, Sasuke was Konoha's 'last Uchiha' and they sent genin and a newly instated chunin after him, knowing that other ninja helped in his escape. The sent clan heirs into a potentially fatal situation that they weren't prepared for. Other than that, the story seems pretty interesting and I hope it stays that way. Keep up the good work! 


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2016
    I look forward to you resuming this story, it's awesome!
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  • From Bamagirl94 on September 23, 2015
    i love how you threw some Inuyasha in there its a brilliant idea
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  • From ANON - rose on August 27, 2015
    please update soon thank you
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  • From ANON - kinkou on March 01, 2015
    *happy squees*. I love the update and the development of the pregnancies. I HATE the Cliffside.... *evil grins* but my suspicions are running rampant. I can't wait for the next update. ^^
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  • From Christopher11 on March 01, 2015
    Except that wanting to rule as "The strongest of the Founding Families" is not evil. It is a natural deduction that only those who were weaker than the family in question would challenge.
    That is why I was always totally against Itachi's portrayal as a 'savior'. He is not a savior. He is a murderous traitor who killed his clan, his FAMILY, based on what they might do.
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  • From EzriCandy on May 26, 2014
    This is an interesting story. I'm only halfway through the second chapter but I just wanted to mention that it may work better to have a beta look over your chapters. I notice that there's a lot of a/an usage. You use 'an' if the word that follows starts with a vowel and use 'a' for everything else. I am definitely going to check out the rest of your story. I'm enjoying the ideas within it so far!
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  • From ANON - Krymzyn on January 18, 2014
    I think I would really really like this story if you just either used actual names (or something other then he/she him/her etc) or if you skipped/ cut down on the long drawn out mini stories. Please do something!! I want to finish it but right now it's just frustrating and annoying to attempt
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  • From ANON - Torakuma on September 22, 2013
    Awesome story. Loved it! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - j_hawk46 on August 22, 2013
    I like the story line. But your grammar is is very bad. Take an the next word is to start with a vowel ( A E I O U) and a the next word is always a consonant. You have run on sentences. Clean up and it would be easier to read. Also use you grammar and spelling checker in your word processing program. I know that Open Office and its descendants have this in it. Keep writing as with those corrections the story would be better reading.
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  • From Dorkchic on June 30, 2013
    Sorry for taking so long to get back to you about your question concerning my review - I have been on a completely different fandom kick and am just now getting back to Naruto. Sad, right? In my review I did not mean that Kakashi knew Naruto through his mother. I meant that as the 4th's apprentice and friend (according to canon) he would have known both Minato and Kushina and it is therefore logical to believe that he knew some things about her.
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  • From ANON - Brandi on May 22, 2013
    I'm loving this story! I hope you update this story soon, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - iichigopudding on February 04, 2013
    ch 1
    So cute xx
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  • From LadyLaran on March 05, 2012
    I stumbled onto this one and am impressed with it so far. So far..Hinata and Shippou huh? Kiba going to be in that as well? I wonder who else?

    I wouldn't mind seeing Gaara with him..he's one of my faves.
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  • From bloodshound on March 04, 2012
    way to combine awesome anime/manga series. ^^
    i wonder who the green beasts of konoha are descended from. :D
    Watch your spelling and word meanings though.
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