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Reviews for The Night Hath Come

By : SSShitstorm
  • From sara101 on August 09, 2016

    What?! No...come on I need more chapters. I love this story please update soon. Please please update. I want to see what happens next


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  • From ANON - Beach Girl on October 16, 2011
    I have wanted to read a story written in the 2nd-person. I used to be wary of self-insertion (SI) fics but I couldn't resist when I saw this one. I really enjoy this fic. Not only do I get to be a ninja, working for Akatsuki and rooming with Itachi, but I'm a pretty badass ninja at that. The fire jutsu she used on that Iwa nin was sick.

    The only thing I can really say you need to improve on is spelling and grammar. Chapter 3, especially, was full of mistakes, a lot of them I think being careless mistakes that likely could have been fixed with a spell checker. I recommend downloading a free spell checker if your word processor doesn't have one or getting someone you know who is good at spelling to read over your work before you post it. Understand that I am NOT flaming your story. I love it. Otherwise, I wouldn't be trying to help you out. I want more people to read it; that's why I want it to be as perfect as it can be. Self-insertion is a hard sell itself. When you have one done right--yes, like this fan fic--it deserves recognition.

    Please keep up the awesome work and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - shinju uchiha on October 15, 2011
    Thank u thank u thank u for posting, I've been waiting forever for the next chapter. Thanks :)
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 13, 2011
    aw.
    well.
    the ending deserved an aw moment.
    but yea.
    nice chapter.
    cant wait for more.
    update soon.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From sara101 on October 11, 2011
    I thought u had forgotten about poor us lol love the chapter cant wait!!! hehe
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 04, 2011
    oooh.
    i like so far.
    i cant wait to see where this goes.
    update soon.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From ANON - mndstjohn on September 22, 2011
    This is pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Negautrunks on September 19, 2011
    I can't wait for the next installment I check periodically please update I'm really liking what you've got so far
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  • From Aimereta on August 22, 2011
    *squees* I'm soooo glad you're back! I always love reading your fics; this chapter in particular had me going 'ohshitohshitohshitshitshit!' XD
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  • From ANON - Nightra on July 26, 2011
    Yet another great story which needs to be continued lol
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  • From Shikasgurl22 on June 21, 2011
    This is interesting and good actually. I like it, though it's my first self story(?) I think you said. I don't know, but I felt like part of the story. Fun time! I can't wait to see what happens next. Am I suppose to say what happens next or just leave it up to you? Forgive me, I'm a newbie. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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