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Reviews for Fire and Lightning

By : caramelcaptain
  • From jamescun on August 27, 2015
    Plz write more cuckold Naruto
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  • From lobo_sangriento on September 22, 2012
    magnificent story please tell me theres more to come i bet Hinata, Kushina would be great prizes for the Raikage
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  • From WhiteDevil on August 05, 2011
    You really need to do one with Kushina and one with Naruko (fem naruto).
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  • From ninjaman87 on June 03, 2011
    i gotta agree seeing kushina in this scenario would be fantastic, having a setting were she tries to scape only to be captured and dregge back to kumo for punishment, and just for fun why not have raikage rape kushina in front of naruto and minato being forced to watch as they are tied on chair and force to be pleasure only to not able to cum
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  • From TheSinful on May 08, 2011
    Women I'd like to see: Konan, Tayuya and/or Kin, Temari (and maybe Matsuri and Sari), Kurotsuchi, Tsume and Hana, Hinata, Yuugao, Yugito and/or Samui and/or Karui.

    Maybe the Raikage could visit Konoha for some reason and have his way with some of the Kunoichi and clan members there. Hinata having to service him or Tsume and Hana in a mother-daughter threesome. Yuugao could be caught trying to spy on Kumo. Konan post-Konoha invasion is trying to help the shinobi alliance or before the invasion is caught trying to capture Yugito. Temari and Kurotsuchi could be the same as the first 2 chapters. Maybe even something out of the blue like revealing that Kushina didn't die but was captured by Kumo? I don't know but I'm just throwing out ideas for you to possibly use.
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  • From Aleaiactaest on April 21, 2011
    Very good stuff, in keeping with the 'smut and politics' plot of your story, a couple of scenarios for you to consider, if you would:
    1) Temari works as the ambassidor for the Hidden Sand Village, and is in the process of hammering out a difficult treaty with this village. Raikage suggests a little something to sweeten the deal, and smut ensues.
    2) An aged up and somehow revived Tayuya and/or Kin look to renew the Hidden Sound Village, and are looking for a patron from a legitimate village. Smut ensues.

    Keep up the awesome work, I'm looking forward to what comes next!
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  • From ninjaman87 on April 20, 2011
    great chapter with the mizukage`s turn, altough i wonder if this happends after the first chapter ?, yuugao could be a good choice for a special interrogation as a captured spy forcing tsunade to compesate to the raikage personaly.

    temari could make a nice choice considering her status and since the raikage is a general in the shinobi war he could have some consorts for the war
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  • From korrd on April 20, 2011
    Loved it. I hope to see another chapter in which Tsunade is included with Mei. Ooh, maybe one where he takes on Ame? Not Pein, but Konan. Possibly taking the Tsuchikage's granddaughter Kurotsuchi. And of course we can't forget Gaara's sister. Keep it up.
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  • From ninesenshi on April 19, 2011
    Pretty sexy stuff. I would like to see more of this story.
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  • From korrd on April 17, 2011
    I like it. Would love to see more in the future, possibly of future negotiations between say Kumo and Kiri? With Konoha along as well on Kumo's side. Or possibly a revenge-esque situation where Naruto uses Kyuubi to subdue Yugito and other Kumo kunoichi for the slight to Tsunade and Anko?
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  • From ninjaman87 on April 17, 2011
    this is amazing!!! great story it was excited to see how tsunade began to break her will by the raikage, please consider making a nother chapter with mei or even tsume, hinata could be an ideal considering how the raikage is deeply interested in the hyuuga clan
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