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Reviews for In The Dark

By : monochrome
  • From ANON - debsdragons on June 09, 2012
    What is Sasuke going to do while Naruto is taking Itachi back to town? Please update soon
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  • From ANON - mikey on August 25, 2011
    wow, my type of story! where and when is the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - kai on June 11, 2011
    hmm...wonder how much a promise means to an uchiha,itll probably alarm itachi if he wakes up without his brother though.wonder if narutos planning to keep sasuke without letting him go back to his family.babies?is sasuke really gonna have babies,questions questions cant wait to see whatll happen next
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  • From ANON - Jen on June 06, 2011
    The way Naruto blinked out of sight, I doubt Sasuke will have much time to try and escape! Naruto has some interesting abilities. I'm not surprised that he's older than he looks (in human years) since there was something kind of all-knowing? about him. (LOL. I wonder what he's going to do about his nakedness when he gets into town. Surely people will notice!) Speaking of Itachi, I'm glad he's Sasuke's first priority in this situation--with how much the brothers love each other, I'd lose respect for Sasuke if he'd forgotten about him! Can't wait to see how Naruto will try and convince Sasuke to "mate" with him. :)
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  • From Carousel on June 05, 2011
    This is such an awesome story! update soon!
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  • From tawanawelch on June 05, 2011
    I'm so grateful for u giving us this latest chapter, thank you.:) I really enjoyed this chaptereven though nothing much happened. I like that there is a ritual for having children although I feel it will be Naruto changing to accommodate such a thing I can't help but want it to be Sasuke who will change, I Love a pregnant Sasuke!>.< I really hope your life gets a bit more settled before too long so u can be able to crank out the rest of the story on a regular.:). Thank you again for this latest chapter n good luck with your schooling.:)
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  • From missbri88 on June 05, 2011
    I hope inspiration strikes and we get more soon! :) I really want to know what's in store for our Sasu-chan.
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  • From moodysavage on June 04, 2011
    sasuke's gonna' be in trouuuuuble...sasuke's gonna' be in trouuuuuble :)

    so glad to see you on again. this is such an interesting story. I like how Naruto doesn't seem to notice the big deal about him being naked and Sasuke keeps noticing it lol.
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on May 31, 2011
    Love it love it! Really Love it!
    Naruto's cool demeanour and arrogance is great! Especially when he is teasing cute Sasuke!
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  • From missbri88 on April 26, 2011
    *grumbles*"Evil vile author torturing us with long waits, short chapters, and constant cliffhangers..."*grumbles more then holds up plate and loudly bangs spoon on the dish* "MORE PLEASE!!!!"
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  • From ANON - La Joconde on April 23, 2011
    Wow, I like where you're going with this. The characters are expressed well, you use enough description to get the point across without going overboard, and the plot itself is interesting and unique. But, I must say, the way you write is kind of difficult for me to enjoy because there's this... sarcasm to it, even in parts that aren't supposed to be funny, and it sort of comes off as if you don't really believe what you're writing. Well, that makes it hard for me to believe it, too, and it all just starts sounding like a joke rather than a serious attempt at fantasy and suspense. I'm sorry if that comes off as harsh, but you seem like the kind of person who can take criticism and actually improve rather than get offended so I figure you can handle it. I look forward to more of your writing!
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  • From tawanawelch on April 23, 2011
    Wow!! That was an exciting chapter!! I loved the way u described Naruto with a smooth rumbling voice. I love OOCness. I sure do wish this was MPreg with Sasuke lol. I can't wait for Itachi's reaction to what's going on. This is going to be so good.:d
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  • From tawanawelch on April 23, 2011
    Dang it! I'm behind! That was an unexpected, pleasant discovery. Now Sasuke can get explanations. I'm so excited about reading the next chapter!!x3
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 22, 2011
    Well that was really an "oh shi--" cliffhanger. I like the fact that Sasuke has noticed that Naruto is attractive, but he's far more concerned about his safety and getting away. Given how bizarre the situation is, it would be ridiculous if he easily gave in to what Naruto wants. And then of course there's Itachi, who absolutely won't be OK with what Naruto wants.

    Hmmm... so what approach will Naruto take in order to get Sasuke to mate with him? He could try the blackmail approach--"I'll let you and your brother leave IF..."--or he could try seducing him in his own obsessively creepy Naruto-ish way (showing up at odd times? bringing him strange gifts?), or maybe he'll be the confident type and just let Sasuke go while telling him he knows Sasuke will eventually come back to him on his own. This Naruto seems smart, confident, and cunning, so the last two seem more of a possibility to me than the first. It's interesting that Naruto knew Sasuke's full name. Makes me think this definitely wasn't a spur of the moment thing and that he might have been planning this for a bit. On the other hand, Sasuke and Itachi did just move into town, so Sasuke couldn't have caught Naruto's attention for all that long. I'll be interested to hear Naruto's explanation for how he found Sasuke next chapter (and of course see Itachi's reaction when he wakes up, LOL.)
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  • From ANON - distantvocies on April 21, 2011
    Totally love the firts second and now third chapter!!!!! Need more! O.o
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