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Reviews for Sakura and Ino give Naruto a Lesson in Sex

By : semetouke
  • From ShotgunWilly on June 23, 2011
    So, just popping in again, here's a to-do list for you.

    1) learn grammar and capitalization rules. You get it both right and wrong several times, but it's wrong 90% of the time

    2) "-kun" is only used for other guys. If you claim to have read the manga or watched the anime, I don't think that there's much any way for you to not know that Naruto calls Sakura "Sakura-chan"
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  • From krissybear on May 31, 2011
    omg....... ^o^ i think im gonna die of happiness now
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  • From themaster on March 17, 2011
    kun is a male honerific,, unless you are saying that she is takeing the male and/or dominite role in this

    and that is informal to the point of being almost slang


    as a suggestion make an extension were naruto returns the favor
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  • From DetoxAngel on March 08, 2011
    Okay, I'm done. And despite the grammatical errors and the terrible misspelling of names (ino yagawa?) I have to say, OH MY GOD this was sooooooo HOT. I mean, really, I only read het if it's real good and threesomes are always a treat, but you blew my mind with this. Very sexy and you have much potential, my friend. I usually clam up and stop reading at the sight of so many errors and typos but the plot, the action, the smexyness was just so good I forgot all about it. Not many people can do that. You have talent, that's for damn sure. Keep it, and I know you'll only get better, though you're already pretty awesome.

    Mega kudos.


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  • From DetoxAngel on March 08, 2011
    Lol, "ino yamagi"? Don't you mean, Ino Yamanaka?
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  • From Vizeerlord on February 21, 2011
    you dropped the last of the main scene too early, then to offer up a chapter two...

    more please.
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