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Reviews for The Rider

By : Lupinecub
  • From ANON - Sakura-fan on July 12, 2011
    What a great start! I'm really intrigued, I haven't come across a story like this one before. My only suggestion would be to maybe break up long paragraphs a bit for easier reading and to separate the lines of dialogue a bit more, but it does work fine as is. I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - dawn on February 14, 2011
    interesting beginning would love to see where you planned to go with this
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